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FrickingKaos:
There was a few ways I could do that dream sequence and I felt like the way I did it was perfect. I could picture it as I wrote it. Glad you approved. My readers on Wattpad loved it. They did not pick up any references though lol they were all telling Brian he needs to dump Leighanne.

RokofAges75:
LOL It was perfectly subtle.  If we hadn't had that conversation, I probably wouldn't have made the connection, but I loved you putting in that little Easter egg.

FrickingKaos:
I am glad that it wasn’t obvious because I thought if I did like a straight ripoff of Titanic it wouldn’t fit in with the story and would feel kind of out of place. However, Brian dreaming about being on stage sounded a little more realistic.

FrickingKaos:
Chapter 40 of If I Knew Then has been posted

RokofAges75:

--- Quote from: FrickingKaos on January 21, 2021, 08:48:33 PM ---I am glad that it wasn’t obvious because I thought if I did like a straight ripoff of Titanic it wouldn’t fit in with the story and would feel kind of out of place. However, Brian dreaming about being on stage sounded a little more realistic.

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Yeah, that would have just seemed cheesy.  Changing it to the stage was a good choice.

Yay for another update!  You're on a roll!

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