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Pandora's Box
honey:
:o wow you weren't kidding when you said you were writing! I think you passed your writers block over to me. :P cause I'm stuck right now and its pissing me off.
nicksgal:
Now why would I kid about something like that? :P When you've had writer's block for six months, any writing is good writing. :D
*hug* I know you'll get unstuck soon. :)
nicksgal:
Oh, and I forgot to mention that I included a handy "This is what's been going on in the story" post, since it's been so long since I updated. :)
It's a very brief summary that would probably only make sense if you had already been reading the story though. :D
nicksgal:
It's not a true update, but I edited Chapter Three.
And since it's not a true update, here is an excerpt. :)
He blinked a little while his eyes adjusted to the light. He seemed in a daze; as if it were the first time he had slept so soundly in a long while. He moved his head so that his weary eyes could look into hers. Those baby blues of his were the ocean of his troubles. Every pain, suffering, longing, and wish rested in that ocean. None of these fell to the depths of the ocean, but sat on the surface. The emotions that had capsized were happiness and faith, but at least his faith began to rise to the surface once more. How was it that such heavy emotions could float on the surface of his eyes and his heart? The night before, his stare had been ice cold, but now his eyes seemed to be warmer than ice.
Was he often told his eyes looked sad and cold?
His weary eyes still blinked, as though they stared into nothingness even as he looked at her.
“I’m sorry…” Her voice dropped in her concern, “Did I wake you?”
His voice shook slightly from his weakness; “No…” He turned his head slowly, “I’ve been thinking….”
“Yes?”
“Why… were you crying for me?”
“Why?”
“Was it pity?”
Minako turned her head from him, quickly shutting her eyes.
“It’s… okay if that’s the reason…”
She turned back to him, “It was more like… I couldn’t imagine being so utterly alone… And it broke my heart…”
“Isn’t that pity…?”
She shook her head lightly, “It’s more like… empathy.”
“Is that a special kind of pity?”
nicksgal:
NEW CHAPTER! NEW CHAPTER!!!! Go read! Go read! It's excellent! And it's the third to last one, so you know it'll be intensely good! Waaah!!!!! ;D
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