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FS for August and #91 is - On Nightingale Hill by Filiklepto
mare:
On to chapter 10!
Wow so now the interesting creatures look like large paper dolls? You are so creative. Where on earth do you come up with these ideas? It makes sense that they would be afraid of fire, especially if they are like I am picturing them to be!
Once again I have to say I love how you portray Nick in the story. He's smart, protective and very caring and fatherly to Lene. So different then the kid always in need. I do admit, the bromance reader in me is wanting the guys to suddenly show up lol
And yay, glad to see they are close to the town although I have a feeling things aren't going to be that easy when it comes to actually getting out of the woods and across the water. I see cookie cutter/paper doll hampering in their future lol
mare:
Thoughts on chapter 11:
I'm glad we got a little more history about Gunther in this chapter. I would still love to know how and if Nick ever met Lene in his world or if she was just an observer that happened to fall for him. I'm sure some flashbacks to that will be coming but now I'm curios to see what kind of powers Nick really has and if that means he's not actually a Carter which would be great news for him! lol
Lol at all the "balls" talk. Great action sequence in the water too!
mare:
Chapter 12:
I loved Nick's lesson how to properly blend your cereals to create the perfect flavor. I live having cereal for dinner every once in awhile and the thought of not mixing and matching is ridiculous to me!
Lene's memory of her patents being killed was heartbreaking. I can't wait to find out why she is aging in the strange way she is.
mare:
Chapter 13:
Yay! Nick is no longer a muggle! I was really looking forward to the point in the story where we would see him learn what his powers are. I have a feeling that just scratched the surface of what he can do.
mare:
Chapter 14:
I don't know what I'm enjoying more, reading the story or reading your author's notes at the beginning of every chapter. I'm so glad I'm reading this late because you would have driven me bonkers with all the delays lol
It was nice reading a chapter from the grown up Lene's perspective. But I'm confused again as to whether he is a Backstreet Boy or not? You mention his family a lot and Nick mentions singing with four other guys but in this chapter, it seemed as though he's not. Now I know how they met at least.
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