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FS for August and #91 is - On Nightingale Hill by Filiklepto
mare:
Wow! Glad to see you updated! Now if we can keep you updating regularly enough to finish the story- that would be awesome!
Chapter 18: Oh, Lene... Do not let the magical guitar make Nick forget things. He already barely remembers stuff. If you let him do that then I hope he forgets you!
Okay, so it's official then. Nick IS a Backstreet Boy! Yay!!
Well Lene, that's what you get for letting a curse overtake the person trying to help you. A timeout from Nick Carter! lol
mare:
Chapter 19:
Yay! The curse has been lifted!
I'm hoping Lene is going to be aging soon. It seems like that's what happens. When I start getting restless with her being a certain age, she grows. And Nick having erotic dreams while she's sleeping next to him is just all kinds of wrong, especially if she ends up being one of the girls he's dreaming about. Ick!
Chrissy:
--- Quote from: mare on August 23, 2014, 03:59:13 AM ---Wow! Glad to see you updated! Now if we can keep you updating regularly enough to finish the story- that would be awesome!
Chapter 18: Oh, Lene... Do not let the magical guitar make Nick forget things. He already barely remembers stuff. If you let him do that then I hope he forgets you!
Okay, so it's official then. Nick IS a Backstreet Boy! Yay!!
Well Lene, that's what you get for letting a curse overtake the person trying to help you. A timeout from Nick Carter! lol
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I love your comments.
"then I hope he forgets you!"
"A timeout from Nick Carter!"
Haha those are the best :D Hopefully, I can get some writing done this week! I'd love to post at least one more update before the end of the month.
mare:
I'm glad you're enjoying my commentary and I do hope you get another chapter out before the end of the month since I only have one more to go before I'm all caught up.
Onto chapter 20 which I have a feeling will not be one of my favorites based on your author's note. lol
See what I mean? I needed Lene to get older and she did. Very nice! I thought I'd be cringing more when you mentioned the sex stuff but it wasn't so bad. I got through it lol
Chrissy:
--- Quote from: mare on August 25, 2014, 03:41:43 AM ---I'm glad you're enjoying my commentary and I do hope you get another chapter out before the end of the month since I only have one more to go before I'm all caught up.
Onto chapter 20 which I have a feeling will not be one of my favorites based on your author's note. lol
See what I mean? I needed Lene to get older and she did. Very nice! I thought I'd be cringing more when you mentioned the sex stuff but it wasn't so bad. I got through it lol
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When I first planned ONH out, I pictured there would be loads of sex in the latter half, hence the R-rating. But now that I'm writing it out I find myself more interested in just telling the story... Not to mention that Nick is surprisingly less eager about the idea of sleeping with Lene than I thought he would be lol. We'll see what happens from here!
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