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Julie's Update Junction
RokofAges75:
That was a very uncomfortable scene to write. This story in general makes me uncomfortable, but that's also kind of how I keep things interesting for myself. If I can freak myself out, that means I might be able to freak other people out too LOL. I am delighted by your "Whoa, what the fuck" LOL. Thanks so much for the feedback!!
RokofAges75:
Chapter 13 of A Heart That Isn't Mine is up, and I just saw that this is the featured story for May! Thanks! I know we don't do featured story threads anymore, but if anyone has questions, I'd be happy to answer them here as long as I'm not spoiling anything.
FrickingKaos:
Okay well I had read this chapter the other day and as I told you on twitter, I got so mad that I closed it out without reviewing. I then got busy with work and writing so here’s my review now. I had to reread it and got mad all over again LOL.
okay so WHAT THE FUCK DID THEY DO TO BRIAN!?!?
Spine damage, possible paralyzation and a brain injury/coma...i mean what is going on with Nick is bad enough but you had to go for Brian too . So damn evil! I mean I knew you were evil already but yeah I got kinda pissed off at this chapter haha. I feel like they’re still lying to him about stuff. Like i mean, they’re lying about how Brian got hurt, first of all. Second, I’m pretty sure there is more to this operation than these operations they’re doing. Can’t wait to see how this plays out, especially with the impending hurricane added to the mix. I kinda want to slap Dani because I do not like her.
Can’t wait for the next update :P
RokofAges75:
You know, I had to find a way to top giving everyone AIDS in my last story, so I decided to be as brutal as possible in this one. LOL! Everything happens for a reason, though, and not just because I am evil.
What makes you think they're lying about how Brian got hurt? Or about anything? I'm sorry you don't like Dani! LOL
Thanks so much for the feedback!!
RokofAges75:
Chapter 14 of AHTIM is up!
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