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FrickingKaos:
Loved this chapter, I read it before i went out for the evening. Loved that you showed what was going on while Nick was unconscious and not just what he was imagining in his head. I enjoyed that transition. Glad he wasn’t really throwing up blood either. I sense that there are some feelings developing between Nick and Dani, maybe that is just me. Or maybe I am not being so cynical lol..dunno which. I’m glad he’s going to be okay (for now) because I know you won’t let him off that easily ;)
Can’t wait for the next chapter
RokofAges75:
Thanks!! I'm glad you liked the transition between reality and Nick's dream or out of body experience or whatever you wanna call it. I've written this story mostly in third person limited point of view, focusing on Nick, but I'm planning to eventually include scenes focusing on other characters, so this will help set up for that. Also it's hard to "show, not tell" when the main character is unconscious LOL.
Hm, you may be on to some things. ;) Thanks again!
RokofAges75:
Chapter 18 of AHTIM is up!
Carter-Orange:
Just caught up on the last three chapters and can't believe their bad luck, not only are they cut off from everyone due to the storm, but the generator goes down and Nick's ICD is working overtime! But so glad they managed to keep Brian alive...for now. Also glad Nick's heart is still managing to keep going.
I am warming to Dani, but there's still something I don't trust about any of them, I'm glad I'm not the only one lol, but we will see.
Storm Melissa, that is a nice touch lol
RokofAges75:
It's a worse case scenario for sure! My characters rarely have good luck, LOL.
I'm glad you're warming to Dani. Everyone is so suspicious on this forum! I love the speculation though.
As for the storm name, I am a stickler for accuracy, so I looked up the name list for this year's Atlantic hurricane season, and when I saw that Melissa is the M name, I laughed really hard and decided it was meant to be. Thanks for mentioning it!
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