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RokofAges75:

--- Quote from: Carter-Orange on August 25, 2019, 04:58:52 PM ---Yes, I knew it wasn't a real hospital! I knew there wouldn't be just four members of staff:) 

You aren't kidding about crazy shit lol, Patrick having sex with a corpse is just nuts, but I bet that's just the tip of the iceberg for those four pyschos.

Can't wait to see what happens next, this is amazing :)

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Thanks!!  I figured people would assume there were more staff members than Nick necessarily saw, at least before the "hurricane" happened.  I've never been able to write a suspense or mystery without someone figuring out everything in advance, though, so I'm not surprised you guys knew something was off.  LOL Your comment about Patrick made me laugh, but you're not wrong.  Just wait and see... :)

RokofAges75:
Chapter 31 of AHTIM is up, and things are gonna get even weirder.  You've been warned!

FrickingKaos:
I so called this too lol they wanted hearts for some sick and twisted reason..... And I had a feeling that it wasn't a real hospital because there were so few employees. So Elizabeth is a fan... Did she set up something so it looked like the Show Me The Meaning video on purpose too.... What a fucking delusional bitch. I felt SO bad for Brian knowing all of this was happening too. I wanted to smack the shit out of Elizabeth.

Now part of me wonders if Dani knows about any of this bs because I really am back to not trusting her. Lol. What a chapter. Made me all angry. Can't wait for more!

Carter-Orange:
You are so right about that!

So both Patrick and Elizabeth are into sex with unresponsive bodies, what a couple of freaks.

I'm thinking their dads funeral parlour has been done up like a hospital room with the money they inherited and the place she just took Brian is the morgue room where the bodies are stored and worked on.  I can't believe she thought he would enjoy it, no wonder the poor guy nearly choke on his own vomit :(

I can't wait for more, this is so evil and twisted and I love it!

RokofAges75:
Thank you both!!  You guys are the only ones who figured any of this stuff out ahead of time.  Elizabeth and Patrick are definitely a couple of freaks - must run in the family.  You'll find out whether or not Dani knows about all this soon.

I'm so glad you're enjoying it and wanting more!  As much as I enjoy horror and sick and twisted stuff, I don't really write it that much outside of 1000 Ways and Revenge of the Slaughtered, which are not serious stories, so this was a new level of sick and twisted for me.  I was worried about what the reaction would be, LOL.  Thanks again!!

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