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Fic Talk => Featured Story of the Month => Topic started by: mare on May 01, 2011, 07:48:21 AM
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Hello all and happy May. We are featuring The Great Divide this month since Jen won best new author at this year's Felix Awards. So, as always feel free to jump in with any comments and questions you have about this one as we read along together.
Let's start with chapters 1 - 12
Here is the link to the story: http://absolutechaos.net/viewstory.php?sid=10326&warning=4
Happy Reading!!
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Congrats Jen! I have had this one sitting in my favourites for a long time waiting to be read :) Now I have the perfect opportunity!
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Yay! Congrats Jen. I started reading this and then slacked off so I think I'm going to keep up so that I can conversate with ya'll :) Loved what I read so far though.
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Congrats Jen, I love this story although I still need to finish reading it :)
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Thanks all! I look forward to any questions you might have for me. :)
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This story was the first that made me really like Jen's writing. I absolutely loved the idea of Nick going on the weight loss show. How did you come up with the idea and the list of celebrities that were on the show?
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This story was the first that made me really like Jen's writing. I absolutely loved the idea of Nick going on the weight loss show. How did you come up with the idea and the list of celebrities that were on the show?
Awww thanks :) I'm a reality TV junkie, so all the celebrities were either off of Flavor of Love or Celebrity Fit Club. Richard Simmons has just always annoyed the HELL out of me, so he was a given for host. :p
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I really liked this story...it was the first I had read by Jen. Congratulation s on be featured!
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So Jen, what was the inspiration for this story?
What was the writing process for you? did you outline it or just went with the flow?
Did you post it right away or sit on it for awhile before posting?
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So Jen, what was the inspiration for this story?
What was the writing process for you? did you outline it or just went with the flow?
Did you post it right away or sit on it for awhile before posting?
I pretty much used this story to kinda jumpstart my own weight-loss. I tend to need a pep talk before I jump into things, so between the story and then forming the Biggest Loser here on the board, I had the elements I needed to get serious about it. Also, as I mentioned a couple posts back, I love reality TV shows like the Biggest Loser and Celebrity Fit Club. I started this story right around the time I went to Oprah to see the boys, so of course that made its way into the story as well.
I've got to admit, I didn't outline this story. I just decided to go with the flow. Adding Kevin was one of those spur of the moment ideas that I think worked out better than I could have planned it.
I did get about ten chapters in before posting. I'm never sure if a story's going to really take off, so four chapters just doesn't do it for me. I have TONS of four chapter story's sitting in a folder. Once a story hits ten, I know it's pretty safe to post. :)
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Congrats Jen!!!
I haven't read this one yet, but it's on my list. I've heard a lot of great things about it. You are an awesome writer! ;)
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I loved how you incorporated Oprah into this...and Kevin. How did you decide to include him? And how did you come up with Jake's personality? He is simply precious! I just want to take him home with me lol
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Happy Mother's day to all who are one or have one!
It's time to read the next set of chapters so let's read chapters 13 - 23 this week.
Here are some more questions for you Jen :)
What were Shay's motivations behind keeping her pregnancy a secret?
What made you decide to have Jake meet Nick prior to Shay seeing him again?
Jake has very particular personality traits, is he based on a particular child?
What made Nick accept his responsibiliti es as a parent so easily?
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Mare I think it's safe to say that we all HAVE mothers in some form or another lol Very appropriate set of chapters to be reading considering it's Mother's Day though!
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You would think, but some are questionable. lol
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I loved how you incorporated Oprah into this...and Kevin. How did you decide to include him? And how did you come up with Jake's personality? He is simply precious! I just want to take him home with me lol
Well, I included Kevin BECAUSE of my Oprah experience. It was pretty epic to be there in person and witness Kevin with the Boys. The whole thing happened so fast that I was needing to keep the Kev love going on for a little longer. Of course, if you've read the story you'll see where that love kinda led :rubs neck: Anyhow...that's also the reason that Shay moved to Chicago. I was having a whole bunch of Chi-town love last fall!
As for Jake...I will address that question in Mare's set of questions! :)
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Happy Mother's day to all who are one or have one!
It's time to read the next set of chapters so let's read chapters 13 - 23 this week.
Here are some more questions for you Jen :)
What were Shay's motivations behind keeping her pregnancy a secret?
What made you decide to have Jake meet Nick prior to Shay seeing him again?
Jake has very particular personality traits, is he based on a particular child?
What made Nick accept his responsibiliti es as a parent so easily?
Shay's motivations for keeping her pregnancy a secret were simple - Nick was a one night stand and royally screwed her over (pun kinda intended). Shay might have a lot of self-esteem problems, but her pregnancy made her step up to the plate. I don't think she wanted to let go of the one p
erson who would love her unconditionall y and share him with a guy who had just taken her heart and stomped on it.
I wanted Nick to meet Jake before he saw Shay because it really showed the dynamic between father and son. Both of them are energetic goons and you can see just how easily Nick clicks with his own son even before he's AWARE that Jake's his son. I also thought it made for a GREAT ending to the chapter when Shay rounds the corner and there's that moment of - 'Oh My God, could it be??'
Jake's personality is based on this one little boy I've had in my preschool storytime for the last two years. He's blonde, obsessed with dinosaurs (and talking), and just about the cutest little booger you've ever seen. I wanted Jake to have an outgoing personality to contrast with his mom's insecure personality. He really is the driving force - and he makes for some of the best comedic moments in the story. :)
Because Nick can be so childlike I just know he's going to be a good parent if and when it happens. I think if he was presented with that type of situation IRL, he does have the maturity now to step up to the plate. Besides, the way I've depicted Jake makes it hard NOT to love him (at least in my biased opinion...)
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I've just finished reading it (there were about 6 chapters I'd not read) and I loved it. I like it when a story works out happy in the end :)
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I've just finished reading it (there were about 6 chapters I'd not read) and I loved it. I like it when a story works out happy in the end :)
Glad you enjoyed it! It actually ALMOST didn't end that way, lol.
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It's time to start reading the next set of chapters. Let's read chapters 24 - 46 this week.
Jen, can you explain how you developed Shay's relationship with Kevin and the process of developing Lauren and Nick's relationship. How much of Nick's real life and experience did you use for their relationship?
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It's time to start reading the next set of chapters. Let's read chapters 24 - 46 this week.
Jen, can you explain how you developed Shay's relationship with Kevin and the process of developing Lauren and Nick's relationship. How much of Nick's real life and experience did you use for their relationship?
At first, I wasn't going to make the guy Kevin, but somehow my description fit him to a T and I thought 'well, that would be an interesting twist.' I think sometimes the best ideas are the random ones. The end result of making Kevin an asshole also wasn't planned. Inititally I was going to have him end up marrying Shay, but the more I wrote, the more I realized that I wanted people to hate him instead. :)
As for Nicky, I love to use bits and pieces of Nick's real life in my stories. Even if it's just a random piece of Twitter-fact that I stick in. I won't deny that I love Nick and Lauren together so making them a couple in stories is extremely easy for me. I actually had a harder time towards the end because of the direction the story went.
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okay guys time to start reading the last set of chapters so let's do 47 - 60 by the end of the month!
Happy Reading!!!
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Just wanted to pop in and say 'thanks!' for voting me Best New Author. It was fun discussing Great Divide this month. :)
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Loved The Great Divide, Jen! I liked how you empowered Shay towards the end and had her stealing Nick away...it was awesome!