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Author Topic: What's There Inside You brainstorms  (Read 5283 times)

MaggieW

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What's There Inside You brainstorms
« on: May 02, 2020, 09:41:06 PM »
Ugh. I'm having trouble coming up with the reason why someone would challenge Brian for leadership of the Enigma Diversity in my story "What's There Inside You" http://absolutechaos.net/viewstory.php?sid=11553 This challenger had convinced someone to kidnap Brian's daughter Rose as part of the challenge. I had once brainstormed a whole list of possibilities, but that list has since disappeared.  :'( I'm also not sure why Akela (Brian's predecessor) would have bound whoever it is to silence until after he (Akela) died.

I started this story over a year ago and haven't come up with an answer!?!?!?
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