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The bus started making weird noises, for about ten minutes, then I felt the bus suddenly start to drive slower and then it pulled over, I looked out the window and we pulled over on the side of the road, I got out of the bunk and so did the other guys.

"Wonder what's going on?" asked AJ

"I don't know," I said, we walked up to the driver

"Hey guys sorry, something's wrong with the bus, I think it’s the engine," the driver said pointing to smoking hood

"Yeah I think so," said AJ nodding,

"Crap there isn't any reception on my phone," said Larry the driver

"Yeah none on mine," said Howie

"Nope not on mine either," said AJ

"Me either," said Brian

"Yeah I don't either," I said

"Hey look I'm going to go see if I can get some help from that house and see if there is phone in there too," said Larry pointing the house to right, which was a old house, and the only one around, as I looked to my left also and just woods

"Whoa no don't go, that house looks really creepy, and is the only house I see, so yeah don't go, we should just wait for at least 20 minutes to see if anyone comes by," I told him, the driver looked at me funny

"I won’t take that long," said Larry

"I've seen movies like this, you shouldn't go,"

"Right ok, its day time, I think I'll be fine,"

"Don't go,"

"You watch way to many movies," said Larry

"I'm telling you I have bad feeling about this,"

"Yeah I'll be back," said Larry, The guys watched Larry walk out of the bus and into the filled

"He'll be fine," said Brian

"I hope so," I said

Ten minutes later

I was biting my finger nails waiting on Larry, he wasn't back and that feeling was worse,

"Hey Nick, its going to be ok," said AJ sitting down next to me, I jumped at the sound of AJ's voice, and he started laughing

"Don't laugh at me," I said

"Dude relax," said AJ

"I can't, I have this bad feeling about Larry," I said to AJ, he just nodded at me

"Ok I'm sure he's fine, I'm going back to my bunk," said AJ standing up and going back to his bunk.

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I was sitting in the drivers seat playing a game on my phone, when I thought I saw something out of the corner of my eye, I looked up but didn't see anything, I went back to my phone, but then heard what sounded like growling and I looked out the window again, but didn't see anything, I looked behind me, and Howie wasn't paying attention, he was on his phone trying to get it to work, and Nick was biting his finger nails, and AJ wasn't around where I could see him.

"Howie where's AJ?” Howie just waved at me and told me to be quite

"AJ went to his bunk," said Nick

"Ok thanks," I turned around in my seat again and went back to my game, but something was making a noise, and it was louder this time, I looked out again but still didn't see anything, I looked at Howie and Nick and they both where looking at me

"What was that?" asked Howie looking scared
"I...I don't know," I said

"It sounded like growling, said Nick standing up, we stayed quite for a few minutes, and the sound got much louder like it was at the door and wanting to come in.

"What's that noise?" asked AJ coming out of his bunk, we all turned and looked at AJ and said shhhhhh to him

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I came out of my bunk after hearing a weird noise, it freaked me out when the guys turned to me and said shhhhhhh, and I didn't know what to do

"What is it?" I asked in a whisper?

"We don't know," said Brian

"Oh," I said

"Brian go look," said Howie

"No you go look, your the oldest," said Brian

"No," said Howie

"Nick's the tallest, he should go," said Brian

"I dont...." the sound got louder and we all got quite, we then heard a new noise, whatever was out there was now clawing at the what sounded like the door of the bus.

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I was starting to freak out whatever this thing was, I was not about to go look even if I was oldest, Kevin needs to do that, even if he wasn't here, he should still be here, Brian was the closest to the bus door, he should look, but I wasn't going to say that, but Brian's back was to us moving to the door.

"Brian what are you doing?" I asked

"Trying to see if I can see anything,"

"And?"

"Nothing,"

"Go look?" said AJ

"Alright I'll look," said Brian

"Brian don't, it could have rabies or something," said Nick. Brian looked at Nick with wide eyes and came closer to us.

"I don't think I want to look anymore," said Brian

"Oh come on, just go look," said AJ

"You go look," said Brian

"No I don't want to," said AJ

"Then stop trying to get me to," said Brian

"Ok guys don't start anything here," I told them

"Fine they both said," the noise stopped

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I was freaking out with whatever that noise was, what if its some kind of monster and it got Larry, and that's why he's not back yet, I didn't want to say that to the guys, cause they would think I was crazy, I sat down and continued to bite my nails.

"Nick seriously you need to stop biting your nails," said Howie, I just ignored Howie and continued biting them.

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Howie was trying to stop Nick from biting his nails and Nick wasn't listening to him and I sat back in the drivers seat and just looked out the window

"Should you be sitting there?" asked AJ

"Yeah why?" I asked

"Just wondering," said AJ, and I saw Howie give AJ the look that Kevin gave not to start anything, and AJ looked away, I sat there starring waiting to see something, all the sudden I saw a claw grab onto the hood and then another claw, I blinked a couple times, it was still there, both claws, I quickly stood up, yelled and moved away from the drivers seat

"What is it?" asked Howie, I was breathing heard, and pointing to the front, I couldn't get my words out.

"Did you see something?" asked AJ and I nodded still breathing hard

"Was it Larry?" asked Nick, I nodded no still freaked out

"What did you see?" asked Howie, I just starred at them, I couldn't talk, I was freaked out, and I pointed my finger to the driver’s area

"Want me to look?" asked Howie, I nodded my head fast and still pointing

"Ok I'll look," said Howie, Howie slowly walked over the drivers area and looked out the window, and I was waiting for yelling and screaming and the monster to pop out, but there was nothing, maybe I was seeing things, Howie walked back and looked at me.

"What did you see?" asked Howie, I swallowed hard and looked at Howie

"I thought...I saw claws, first I saw one claw and then the next one," I told them

"Oh," said Howie and looked at the other guys, great now he thinks I'm crazy, but I saw the fear in Nick's eyes, he believed me.

"Ok so I'm going outside to look," said Howie

"What, no you can't go," I said freaking out

"Nothing is out there, nothing will get me," said Howie

"Fine, that's what you think," I told Howie, Howie was at the bus door and he rolled his eyes at me

"You shouldn't have let him go out there," said Nick, I was watching and waiting to see what happened, I could barley see Howie's head and I saw him coming back in

"I think its ok," I said to Nick, Howie came walking back in, but something wasn't right, he looked like he saw a ghost.

"Um y'all might want to sit down," said Howie

"Why what did you see?" I asked

"Um at the door, there were....claw...marks in the door and also on the hood," said Howie looking very frightened

"Shit," we all said

"Claw marks so Brian was right that he saw them?" asked Nick, Howie nodded

"See I told you I saw claws,"

"Ok yeah you were right, so there is something outside, and we need to stay inside," said Howie looking at all of us, and we all nodded, I sat down across from Nick and looked out the window and saw Larry coming, at least I think it was Larry, he looked different and dirty, I quickly got up and went to the door.

"Brian what are you doing, didn't you hear what I just said?" asked Howie

"Larry is coming," I said

"Oh," and Howie and the guys looked out the window

"Wait I wouldn't open that door, he doesn't look right," said Nick

"I know he could be hurt," I told them, they all came to the door with me, just as Larry knocked and told us he needed in and that he was hurt

"Are you sure we should open that door?" asked Howie

"I think we should," I said

"Alright it’s your fault, if he kills us," said AJ

"Shut up AJ," I said to him

"Brian I really don't think you should open that door," said Nick, I swallowed hard and ignored Nick and slowly opened the door, to our horror, Larry was covered in blood, and he looked hurt.

"We have to go right now, something tried to kill me and its not human," said Larry trying to get in, then I heard it, the growling and it was getting louder, and Larry was trying to push past us, and then the growling was getting louder and louder and Larry was shouting to get in, then out of no where the monster grabbed Larry and ate him and we all screamed.

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