Reviewer: Firefly Signed
Chapter 8: Chapter 8
affairs are just plain old bad news... *I shudder to think* Anyway, first of all, this is so well written! It feels so realistic and is so full of emotion. You've done so well at letting us see the situation through Nick's eyes, that his actions are almost justifiable. (almost... lol cheating is like my neumero uno no-no!) But I just have so much pity for all three of them. Each just doing the best they can, and all sort of screwing up. Seriously, this is a great story and I am very curious to see where you are taking it. Things can only get more complicated from here on out. You've also grasped the concept of a stay home parent extremely well. All those thoughts of loneliness, insecurity, uselessness, frustration because it's a tedious, thankless job... Mad props there. Such is a tiny piece of my life every single day. I'm actually in a great marriage now, but there was a time, not that I ever had an affair, but I did have my suitcases packed on more than one occasion, so reading this story it's almost like I'm reading about me, and what my life could have turned into if I'd chosen that route. It makes me appreciate my decisions even more. Ok, sorry, I'll stop gushing over your story now, but seriously, I'm honestly completely caught up in it now, so you must continue on a timely fashion with the updates. And, yes, someone did die and make me the update police! I love it hun! Keep up the BRILLIANT work!
Author's Response: Wow! That's quite the review. Thank you so much! It means a lot that you took time and let me know what you thought! In one way I'm glad you could relate but at the same time... not so much. :/ There will be more shortly!