Summary: Detective Kevin Richardson is working a very hard case. One involving a serial killer who preys upon young children. At least he knows at the end of the day he has his family to fall back on. His three brothers and his best friend will help him through the mystery and be the glue that keeps him together as he gets closer to finding the madman behind it all. AU/suspense/drama (obviously lol) rated R
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Kevin, Group
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Suspense
Warnings: Violence, Graphic Violence, Death
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 120913
Read Count: 71624
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I'm Steph from the UK and although Kev was always my favourite back in the old days, I now love all those boys (Nick maybe more than the rest).
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Published: 03/05/05 » Updated: 01/06/06
Published: 03/05/05 » Updated: 01/06/06
Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed
Date: 05/25/13 Title: Chapter 7: 1
Author's Response:
Date: 05/25/13 Title: Chapter 7: 1
Aw poor Nick, but he'll learn that eating too many sweets is not a good idea, especially at bed time!
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My fluffy chapter lol
Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed
Date: 05/25/13 Title: Chapter 1: 1
Author's Response:
Date: 05/25/13 Title: Chapter 1: 1
Making my start for the reading challenge and really enjoying this so far. It's not my usual kind of story as I don't usually read things where kids are harmed/tortured, but as long as Kev and Howie catch the bastard in the end, I'll be happy :)
Author's Response:
Hey Steph! It was nice seeing I had a review for this one! I know what you mean about the kids thing. I had a hard time writing it because of the subject matter. I hope you don't find it too disturbing!
Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed
Date: 05/30/13 Title: Chapter 19: 19
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Date: 05/30/13 Title: Chapter 19: 19
Wonder what Lisa was up to? Why all the fake ID's? Is she part of it or get caught up accidentally? Exciting stuff!
Author's Response:
Wow, you read a lot of this today! You rock!!
Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed
Date: 05/30/13 Title: Chapter 17: 17
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Date: 05/30/13 Title: Chapter 17: 17
How would he know about the extra phone line, unless he knows Jack of course. This is soooo exciting!
Author's Response:
Glad you think this is exciting, yay!
Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed
Date: 05/30/13 Title: Chapter 13: 13
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Date: 05/30/13 Title: Chapter 13: 13
I'm sure Lisa will love him :) I loved how he charmed everyone in the office and thought Kevin's job was boring.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Steph! I was always afriad that he acted younger than he was in that scene. lol
Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed
Date: 05/30/13 Title: Chapter 14: 14
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Date: 05/30/13 Title: Chapter 14: 14
Urgh, that's one thing I can't handle...puking kids!
Author's Response:
You and me both! Puking anyone actually lol
Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed
Date: 05/30/13 Title: Chapter 15: 15
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Date: 05/30/13 Title: Chapter 15: 15
OMG one of the figures is missing, that means he's been in the house!!! *bites nails*
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Dun Dun Dunnnnnn
Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed
Date: 05/30/13 Title: Chapter 12: 12
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Date: 05/30/13 Title: Chapter 12: 12
Tossed the notes aside thinking he won't need them? Hmm, I'm sure that won't be the case ;)
Author's Response:
Aww, I have been doing a pretty good job of knowing what you're talking about because I read this story last year as I changed it from fanfic to an OF but I don't remember what notes he has tossed aside. lol
Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed
Date: 05/28/13 Title: Chapter 10: 10
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Date: 05/28/13 Title: Chapter 10: 10
LOL anal string bean!
I can understand his mum was mad with him for doing that to Nick, but he won't forget that and hopefully if a stranger tries to talk to him, he'll run away instead of chatting.
Author's Response:
It's funny the feedback for this one was so varied. There was a mix of people who completely agreed with mom about being mad with Kevin and how harsh that was and then the other side, defending Kevin for doing that. I don't know where I would fall. It is scary how many kids probably would get right into a car with a stranger.
Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed
Date: 05/28/13 Title: Chapter 11: 11
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Date: 05/28/13 Title: Chapter 11: 11
That was really creepy, he got into his house *shudders*
I'd be staying at Howie's if I was him too!
Author's Response:
I know! Me too!! :O)
Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed
Date: 05/28/13 Title: Chapter 9: 9
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Date: 05/28/13 Title: Chapter 9: 9
I think Nick and AJ both learned a lesson there, scary thought though that a child could be snatched from outside the house. And those poor parents who'd got their hopes up about their daughter, so sad :(
Really loving this though Mare :)
Author's Response:
I think this was my favorite chapter to write. LOL Thanks, Steph!
Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed
Date: 06/06/13 Title: Chapter 25: 25
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Date: 06/06/13 Title: Chapter 25: 25
LOL at the kangaroo imaginary friend, my mum said I had an imaginary friend called Robert when I was little.
Hmm, you can't trust anyone can you, is she in on it or not? And those letters? He's brainwashed Nick...or is there more to it?
Author's Response:
I used to have an imaginary friend too. His name was Norbert and he lived on my shoulder. He has a body cast because he kept falling off. LOL
Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed
Date: 06/13/13 Title: Chapter 26: 26
Date: 06/13/13 Title: Chapter 26: 26
Oh no, what's she sorry for? Must read on to see!
Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed
Date: 06/13/13 Title: Chapter 27: 27
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Date: 06/13/13 Title: Chapter 27: 27
OMG I really thought Nick was dead in the morgue, but thank god for that scar on the hand which meant it couldn't be him.
I still don't know who to trust though, I think Kevin should keep everything to himself until he's sure.
This is so exciting!
Author's Response:
Aww good, glad you think it's exciting! :O) Thanks, Steph!
Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed
Date: 06/15/13 Title: Chapter 28: 28
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Date: 06/15/13 Title: Chapter 28: 28
OMG nooooo, Howie didn't just get shot did he? And how can Kevin's dad be there? What's going on? He's supposed to be dead! Why would he fake his own death? Must read on :)
Author's Response:
Aww, yup he's back! And you'll find out in the next chapter I think? I don't think I make you wait that long to find out why he left. I don't remember about Howie though lol
