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Anita's life is turned upside down after a drunken stupper and a bad choice on AJ and Howie's behalf. One little secret whispered into the wrong ear can change it all. Which results in a big misunderstanding and two broken hearts.
i think the plan is kinda riskfull but this is getting very exciting.
Author's Response: they are such morons. Thank you.
great chapter. and so not fait to anita.
really cute chapter. so cute to see the two of them together.
and that makes it a lot more complicate, that she starts to like him.
damn... cute what nick told her and so cute that they kissed. but she should have told him. it even gets harder if she is lying to him now. and aj is an asshole!
Author's Response: Yeah, she is just so paranoid about his reaction that she loses all the nerves to tell him. Hell I would be scared to do it too. Thank you.
damn can't believe that aj is such an asshole :(
Author's Response:
Yeah he sure is in this one, for a long while too. Thank you.
awwwwwww so sweet. but... she has to tell him as soon as possible. i have a bad feeling :(
Author's Response:
Oh and your feelings are right on the dot girl. Trouble is ahead. Thank you.
damn... i think casey is going to tell nick if aj won't. and when nick find out that way... don't wanna think about it :(
i knew that something like this is going to happe. shit that she didn't get a chance to tell him. that would have been hard to but she could tell him in her own words :( i can understand that nick feels hurt now :(
After betraying her trust yet again, Alyssa finally gave up on Nick. She moved on and began a seperate life far away from him. But there are some people that life just won't let you let go of. What happens when they find their lifes entwined once more? Now that the stakes are higher, will they risk losing everything they have for another chance? Sequel to Under my Skin.
Okay... all of her options have some bad things in it. though i have to admit that i'm for the A plan.
and i think that lying was really not the thing she should do cause in the end it even gets more difficult for all of them.
Author's Response: I agree... Lying isn't the best option, but will Alyssa listen? We'll have to see!
okay, now it is time for a review. i read the story from the beginning till this chapter and hell yeah, i LOVE LOVE LOVE it. it is actually the first fully english story i've ever read and i was a little bit unsure to do it but... i love it!!! and i so can't wait to read who everything is going on. i have a few conclusions about whats gonna happen. and yay, i can't wait to read the chapter in which nick and alyssa are going to hook up. and yeah, i think there were a few points that showed already that there is still something though they both don't wanna see it that way yet.
anyways... gonna read on probably tomorrow, let's see how far i get then ;)
much love.
Author's Response: Thanks hun! I am so sorry that I am just responding to feedback now. I was out of town for the weekend. I am so glad that you are enjoying this story! You left a bunch of reviews so I'll say more in those.
just read another chapter... and WHOW. the dreams was really intensive. but i guess, alyssa can't deny that there is at least something. otherwise she would not have a dream like that about nick. but well, hard situation... i mean there is the sexual point of you... and she admitted that the sex life is a lot better with nick than with sean... but, does she love nick? or sean? and about the question, if he is thinking the same way... i think he does. i mean, there has to be a reason why he kept her pictures on his laptop ;)
gonna read more tomorrow!
Author's Response: Yea there is definitely still feelings lingering on both of their sides in their self consciousness. Good questons though and you'll find out soon enough as you keep reading.
whow... i LOVE the kissing szene!!! this was just amazing. i want to read more of that!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I think that was prolly like the best kissing scene that I ever wrote. Thanks!
I so knew that this is going to happen... that shayla is going to tell him that she is pregnant. and well... i can just a little unterstand his reaction to it.
Author's Response: Yea especially after Shayla made that comment about forgetting her pills!
i knew it from that moment that nick wanted to surprise her at the doctor's that she is faking. BITCH! right decision of nick what he told her. and i LOVE the end. whow!!!
Author's Response: Thanks hun! This sets us up for the next chapter!
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