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She had always known what she wanted and had worked hard to make her dreams a reality, nothing would come between her and her ambitions....
....even if it meant saying goodbye to him
WOW....Amazing chapter. You captured the hurt of losing a child so beatifully! Wonderfully done. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks hun
Arghhhh she frustrates me so much! Damnnit!!!!!!!!! I litterly cussed out the computer when she dumped him. I can see where Nick is coming from and she is being selfish...maybe he should leave her and give her a taste of his own medicine! I am sick of her attitude and her only thinking about herself!
Author's Response: There is going to be a bit of a breakthrew in the next chapter I promise and you might even start to like Adie or understand her reasoning! Thanks for the review!
Oh and by the way wonderful chapter..sorry got a little carried away but the fact that you can make people do that says so much about your writting. You are truely gifted and I hope to see another chapter soon...until then I will be hanging on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response:
Aww You have made my day sweets! That's a really nice thing to say, hopefully I won't leave you hanging too long! x
Wow! You actually had me crying on this chapter! Good job! Update ASAP!
Author's Response: Really? Awe sorry hun! Thanks for the review xx
Great chapter...I hope that Adie comes goes to Nick...update soon!!!!!!!
Author's Response: You will soon see! x
Wow...you updated the next day....yay! I loved this chapter. I loved how you built up her arrival..as always beatifully written, wonderful job! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks glad you liked it!
Wow...first of all let me say that I am proud of Nick. He really showed in this chapter maturity and he also stood up for himself. It would serve Adie right if he walked away from her and found someone else. She has been selfish throughout the whole relationship and everything has to be on her terms. I am glad that Nick didn't just fall back into a relationship with her but stood up to her.
Adie is once again playing the victim role that she is so good at. I am glad that Nick isn't falling prey to it anymore.
As for the end I understand completley Nick losing his temper....He wanted to leave and he is exhausted and sometimes we do things that we aren't proud of when we are overwraught.
It dosent' need to be said but I loved this chapter. I love your writing you really make the characters come to life and make them human.
I can't wait for an update!
Author's Response:
It would have been so easy for him to just fall back into old habits and for the first third of the chpater he did just that. I think the realisation hit him hard and that was when he knew he needed to open up, he needed to make her see because he was only going to end up resenting her even more if he let it drag on. It was definetly the wake up call that she needed!
I think Nick loosing his temper is going to truly shock not only her but him as well. It is going to make them both realise what a mess they both are and I think they are going to have contrasting solutions to it, one is going to want to fight while the other is going to want to give up (No guesses who!)
Thanks so much for the awesome compliments hun, I'm glad you are enjoying the story! x
Yay another chapter! I loved how you made Adie fight for the relationship in this chapter. I also loved the roadtrip idea. Can't wait for an update! Oh yeah I loved that you basically mixed Nicks real life girlfriend and Lauren and the cupcake and the picture of her looking at him...Great Job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Hun. I thought mixing is real life with the story makes it more belivavle.
Another great chapter! I loved how you made Adie more sympathetic in this chapter and not all selfish. I also LOVED how you made them remember the past and what made them fall in love. The end was the cutest thing ever. How he teased her about the murder and she teased him about the gremlins lol...so funny. I loved this chapter. I can't wait for an update. This goes without saying but your an amazing writer! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks. I think it's time Adie realises that she needs to take Nick's feelings into consideration. They needed to remember all the good stuff rather then just focusing on the bad, because that will be in the next chapter. Thanks so much for the amazing compliment!
SOOOOO when are we going to get an update? I am really having Adi and Nick withdrawls, I have gone back and read the story twice.....just a little nudge to let you know your adoring fans are waiting. lol.
Author's Response: Here you go hun! The latest chapter all for you! Enjoy!
Wow that was such a powerful chapter! Amazingly done. I liked that Adie is letting Nick lean on her for once, I really hope that they make it. Update soon. I know how it is balancing work its crazy lol! If you need anything just ask.
Author's Response: I'm glad u liked it! As for your offer of help u don't want togoto work for me do you? LOL! It's crazy busy for the summer time and we have just had our first confirmed case of swine fly in Picu! Ek scarey then again if I was to get it time off work but I'm pretty sure I would be in no fit state to write! Adis is finally being the strong one and it's going to cntinue into the next chapter but nick is not used to that behaviour he is not used to being the vunetable one and it is going to spark problems! Thanks for reviewing!
Okay so I think I am officially going insane with wanting an update. You and caby are writing my two favorite stories and niether one has updated.....nudge nudge!
Author's Response: I'm a terrible writer! The chapter is done but at the moment the I lyi ternet access I have is through my I phone and so I can't update. I am going to my mums house on Monday tho so you will have an update then!
YAY! You updated and the day before my b-day so I am going to believe that you updated for me lol..Wonderful chapter as always. I love how you write your characters, I know I said it before but I am going to say it again you are extremely talented! I love how Nick is finally letting down his wall and actually showing emotion.I laughed out loud when Adie told him that she faked in bed. I cant wait for another chapter! Good luck with your paper you write beatifully so you will do wonderful!
Author's Response: Awwww happy birthday for tomorrow! Hope u enjoyed your present! LOL! Thanks so much for yr amazing compliments! It's stuff like that that makes me want to keep on writing, even though it would be so much easier at the moment to give up! There will be more show of emotion from Nick but it won't be easy and like Adie said if she has to knock his walks down brick by brick then she will! Thanks for being do patient!
YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY! You updated and made my whole day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay sorry just a little exicted! I thought it was beatifully written and I am so glad that Nick finally let her in and showed her why he is how he is. You did an amazing job describing how he was feeling. I love how you showed how much Nick idolizes Kevin and the guys and how much they mean to him. Great Great Great. This isn't the end of the story is it? If so you have to write a sequal. Wonderful job. Okay I better get to class but once again Great job!
Author's Response: Don't apologize for be g excited because reviews like yours make me excited so yay yay yay! Thanks for the compliments! I'm glad I portayed the emotion right that's always important to me. As for nick and kevin, I can see their relationship being like that, I get the vibe from interviews nick has done that he really looks up to keV and he has saidhimself that there was a time when he learnt more from backstreet then he did his own family. I thought it was important to include that . Glad u liked it x
Wow such hostility towards Adie from Angel. That was unexpected. I liked how Nick and Adie are taking the high road and being mature about situations now. I also like how they express thier love much more freely.
Author's Response: Nick and Adie so seem to be communicating better but I'm not sure how long that will last. After all they do still have many more issues! Thanks for the review!
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