Leighanne sure has some deep and complicated emotions concerning her relationship with Brian. It's rather sad to see a relationship turn sour and begin to fall apart after having started out so strong. Although, Leighanne could be reading too much into it. All I can say is the smart thing for her to do would to chill over the thoughts and play things out before making any rational decisions. It's only obvious that she really does love Brian, otherwise she wouldn't be worrying over this like she is. You are off to a good start on this. I am really glad you decided to post this and I am still very curious to see where you are planning on taking this. Keep up the great work and update soon! [Ashley] PS. The pic you emailed me was still just as small as the one on the site here. Dunno why. THought I'd let you know.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review, and i'm glad you decided to check back for an update. :) As for what Leighanne's feeling, yes she does still love Brian, she's just having a little trouble realizing that. I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter, and I hope I won't end up disappointing you along the way as you continue reading this story. Right now i'm working on the second chapter, and it's focused on Brian for the time being. I'm not too sure I'm doing the details all that well though.. so I hope everyone enjoys the second chapter as much as they did the first! :) And i'm sorry about the picture. I could've sworn I sent you two because the first one was small, and then I thought I sent a larger one after that.. maybe you havent' gotten it yet. Anyway, i'll try having the next chapter up soon. :)

Ya know, Howie and Kevin never get enough recognition when it comes to the work they put into. Not enough singing recognition. Sure they get more now then they used to, but not nearly enough. Personally, I don't blame them for wanting to just hit the road and get away for a while. And damn, a little marital discourse between Kevin and the wifey? That's never a good thing. Keep up the great work you two! You're both off to a good start! [Ashley]

Whoa...wow...really, I don't know what else to say and that is a good thing. This definitely isn't your average every day fic but you have REALLY pulled me in just with the first chapter and REALLY hooked my curiosity. [Ashley]

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that. :) I hope to enjoy subsequent chapters. I definitely edited this one a bit, but... I hope that, despite the older earlier chapter not being updated, that they still are an enjoyment. :)

Hey Jenn! Not too shabby for a short fic. Could have used a bit more detail and the story line could have been given a bit more development. But overall it wasn't too shabby. I just wanted to point out one mistake I noticed while reading. Kevin's son's name is Jake, but at the beginning of the birthday scene you mention several times that his name is Zach and then you switch it back over to Jake. I just wanted to point that out so you could go back and change it to omit any confusion. [Ashley]

Quite the jealous streak Hannah demonstrated. Would have liked to see the chapter drawn out more with more interaction between Kevin and the fans. More in depth detail would have been nice, too. The chap wasn't shabby though, just short. Hope to see an update soon! Keep up the good work Lenners! [Ashley]

I had a very big feeling that Kevin wasn't really dead, and an inkling that Hannah wasn't being "arrested for murder". Somehow figured it was some sort of ploy for her protection. But I do have to say that you gave a major twist to the fic. Good job. [Ashley]

Ashley! A new one from ya! Bout time again! Haha. I was psyched to see that you had a new one out! And just the summary itself caught my attention and then reading the first chap caught my attention even more! This was good! You've got me wanting more. I definitely love a good mystery fic! Email me sometime. I think we already discussed it once before but I think we should think about collaborating sometime soon on a fic! Keep up the good work and update soon! [Ashley]

Author's Response: Aww! Thanks :) This is an idea I've had going for months...and the fic is just about done, so I decided to start posting! Why not, huh? lol. I will email you today or tomorrow! Thanks again :)