Good start to this. You've got my attention hooked, so I should definitely say I would like to see where you plan on taking this. A little more detail would be nice, but it is still decent. Keep up the good work and update soon! [Ashley]

Well darnit, it's about time you finally updated this! I'm really beginning to think I'm a bit psychic when it comes to knowing when stuff is going to happen. I was seriously just thinking about this story yesterday or the day before and wondering when you were going to update it and poof, here's an update. Things like that happen to me all the time, especially with phone calls and crap. LoL. I really enjoyed reading about the time Brian got to spend with his family during the Thanksgiving holiday. It was very warming and the interaction between Brian and Emma was wonderful. They seem to have the bond that I wish I had with my brother. Great job on the chap. Please update soon; don't take nearly as long as you did this last time! Keep up the great work! [Ashley]

I feel as if I have read this somewhere before and I looking back on when you first posted it, that's probably where I read it. LoL...don't know how I didn't manage to review it the first time around. I am enjoying this so far! Keep up the good work! [Ashley]

Well dammit woman, if you were in love with him in the first place and still are in love with him, then why did you push him away? I really am enjoying this so far and am curious to see what direction you plan on taking this! Keep up the good work! [Ashley]

Ooh, quite the turn around to an interesting end after that steamy little scene between Izzie and Brian. Bout time we get into some action. Curious to know what the cops have to say. Great job! [Ashley]

I've got a confession to make. I started reading this chap several weeks ago, but only made it through the first scene. I just haven't had much time for any reading lately. But I'm glad I have finally got the chance to catch up on my reading. I'm really impressed with your writing. You have a great way of expressing each character's emotions to the point where it isn't overdone and is actually believable. I hope to see an update for this soon! Keep up the great work! [Ashley]

First let me start off by saying one word: WOW. I was defenitely not expecting that. But once again (like always) by the end of the chapter I am left amazed by your ability to express all of the emotions through each and every detail in the chapters you write. I am really intrigued and can not wait to see where you take this. Keep up the great work and please update soon! [Ashley]

"Howie said it was my blue eyes that put people into a trance, but Howie sometimes says very gay things like that and then spends the rest of his time trying to convince people he isn’t gay."

Haha, that has got to be my favorite line of this whole thing, and not because I have ever believed that Howie is gay, but because you worded that line so perfectly. It was hilarious. Are you going to be writing more for this or was this it? [Ashley]

Author's Response: Hey Ashley I think this is probably it for now. I can\'t see me writing more of it, but i\'m not going to make that a definite no, we\'ll see I guess. lol