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A Write Kind of Love by Gravity 721 Rated: R Liked [ - ]
Summary: Past Featured StoryVeronica takes a chance and writes a letter that will forever change her life.

Nick is on a downward spiral. His family life is out of control and he'd rather forget, than deal with it. One day he reads a letter and his life changes forever.

Two lives that at first glance, have nothing in common and yet have everything in common.

One letter leads to a friendship and a love that is only understood by them. With everyone telling them no, can they hold their own and say yes?
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: None
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Content
 Series: None
Chapters: 175 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 215936
Read Count: 479235


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Published: 10/16/05 » Updated: 12/26/07
Reviewer: Hilda Warren Signed Liked
Date: 03/11/06 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Your story has a good storyline development. It is interesting to read on. Don't worry about the number of chapters, it is not too much. A little suggestion-I would concentrate more on the character's personlity's development to make them more ''real''.... Keep on writing!

Author's Response: Thanks Hilda, I'm glad you're reading! Thanks for the advice!

Reviewer: Hilda Warren Signed Liked
Date: 03/14/06 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

The first thing I have to say is that in this chapter you have really worked on Veronica's character. You showed how unsure about herself she is and how she is controlled by her father. That is tragic when parents can control their already grown up children even in judging their relationships. I think a lot of people can relate to her feelings. About Nick...it was nice to see how he felt for her, that he was even brave enough to start the talk about last night. Guys do that rarely and IF they decide to do so, you can be really sure that this girls means to him a lot. And admitting that she isn't an''easy lay'' for him is a really big step forward in their relationship. I can envison what happens next,but..I'll better wait for your update...

Author's Response: LOL! I'm keeping what you said in mind, these chapters were written quite a while ago, I'm currently up to chapter 101, so I'm trying to improve with each chapter. Yeah, it's very important to see the impact the things and events around them have on their lives and their personalities, you'll see more of that as the story continues since you'll start seeing more conflict and such. I'm curious as to what you see happening next! Thanks Hilda!

Reviewer: Hilda Warren Signed Liked
Date: 03/29/06 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

another nice chapter. I like the way you've started to prtray Nick....he has some kind relaxation in his situation right now...he's most likely enjoying life in terms of having it simple...and with Veronica, he even enjoys that... Be careful with bringing up the divorce issues. They are important, but balance it so that they don't overshadow, but support the mutual match of Nick and Veronica...with small steps, make their relationship closer... Writing is not about speed of writing our quantity..its about inspiration and quality, so don't worry!

Author's Response: Thanks for the comments and suggestions Hilda. I'm glad you're still reading!

Reviewer: Hilda Warren Signed Liked
Date: 04/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

First of, it was quite a long wait till the update, but I guess it was worth to wait. :) I liked the way you showed how she stood up for herself against her father. This is a really impotant issue for her. Though I would've wished to see her inner thoughts.What had the most effect on her to do so?Does she at least hope he likes her? Or she doesn't care?Does she want him or not? In her opinion, where is this relationship going? Another thing what would've been wonderful was if you'd show Nick's thoughts. How does he feel about her?Is she just a holiday fling or something more? I would suggest you, in the next chapters, to focus on Nick's feelings and his attitude towards Veronica. Add some more romance.

Author's Response: Thanks Hilda. Sorry for the wait, I'm really trying to get back into the writing. Now that I've reached the 100 chapter mark, I seem to be dwindling. Thanks for the suggestions!

Reviewer: Hilda Warren Signed Liked
Date: 04/13/06 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

First of, it was quite a long wait till the update, but I guess it was worth to wait. :) I liked the way you showed how she stood up for herself against her father. This is a really impotant issue for her. Though I would've wished to see her inner thoughts.What had the most effect on her to do so?Does she at least hope he likes her? Or she doesn't care?Does she want him or not? In her opinion, where is this relationship going? Another thing what would've been wonderful was if you'd show Nick's thoughts. How does he feel about her?Is she just a holiday fling or something more? I would suggest you, in the next chapters, to focus on Nick's feelings and his attitude towards Veronica. Add some more romance.

Author's Response: Responding to this because it keeps showing up as unresponded and I\'ve already responded to it! LOL!

Reviewer: Hilda Warren Signed Liked
Date: 04/18/06 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

This chapter was definitely hot! Hadn't expected that the story might take such a turn. It was all of sudden. But it was also needed, because in a way in marked the line for they relationship-if they are going to be only friends or something more. To the author- I sent you a little message through the ''contact'' option. Did you get it? Please let me know what you think about what I said! :)

Author's Response: I'm all about surprises! ;-) Gotta keep ya on your toes. As for the message, I'm trying to think...hmm, I went through and finally responded to emails I've recieved last night, was there one from me? LOL I vaguely remember seeing your name, but I can't remember if I responded or not :-( . Then again I may have read it and didn't get to it last night, which happens. I've been so bad about responding promptly to emails. I'll do a double check right now. If I haven't, sorry, I'll respond asap! Thanks Hilda

Reviewer: Hilda Warren Signed Liked
Date: 04/23/06 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Another good chapter, yet this time it turned out a little short. The plotline you are following is exciting, but I do feel that you are a little confused about what to do next. To-the author-once again I sent you something through the ''Contact'' option. The last time I didn't get any response from you. I'd like to know what you think about my idea.Hope to hear from you soon.

Author's Response: Hmm, well I emailed you a few days ago inquiring about what you sent me, but I didn't hear back from you so I'm wondering if the contact option on here is working properlly. I'll have to check and see if there's another way for me to get your email.

Reviewer: Hilda Warren Signed Liked
Date: 08/07/06 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Aww, this is so sweeet! Will they be more as friends or not? Nick is so sweet i want him!!!!

Author's Response: We\'ll have to wait and see if they become more than friends! Thanks Hilda!

Reviewer: Hilda Warren Signed Liked
Date: 10/09/06 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

This was sweet, but still it's moving a bit slow for me...I hope something important happens soon...

Author's Response: Ahh good things come to those who wait! *wink* Hang in there, I\'ve got a few twists and suprises coming up! Thanks Hilda!

Love Takes Time by ashley marie Rated: PG-13 Liked [ - ]
Summary: Lauri Fostern is content with her new job. It pays the bills (easily), keeps a roof over her head (a nice one), and put food on the table. The only downside is her boss, Nick Carter. From the first few moments of their meeting, they came to a mutual dislkie for the other. He thinks she is to self-righteous and she thinks this job is a pit-stop until she gets a better one, the one she worked all through college for.But being forced to spend hours and days together makes them both come to the same realization. Time makes the heart grow fonder...





Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Content
 Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 43097
Read Count: 69944


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Published: 12/14/05 » Updated: 09/09/06
Reviewer: Hilda Warren Signed Liked
Date: 03/31/06 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

a really nice chapter. I've read all the previous ones,too... Your plot is quite original and I like way you move it on. This chapter definitely hooked me finally. I want to know what's going to happen next! Update soon!

Reviewer: Hilda Warren Signed Liked
Date: 04/14/06 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

The episode where Lauri caught him in the middle of ''being busy'' with that girl was hilarious! Giving him the candy was just great. I bet he must've felt really confused. One thing I would've liked to read is how did he feel about the situation? WHAT does he feel about Lauri? Is he really looking forward to go on tour with her? About Lauri...What does she feel?Has she started to like him? What was the reason for that? Hope to get some of my questions answered in the next chapters! :)

Reviewer: Hilda Warren Signed Liked
Date: 04/18/06 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Another nice chapter. What I would want to know is-how does Nick feel about the fact that he has the objective to spend so much time together with Lauri? Is he happy about it? What does Lauri really feel about him?

Author's Response: Don't worry, i've been trying to find a way to fit that it. it's kinda tough, writing in lauri's first person, to get into nicks head, but i'll work it in there somehow!

Reviewer: Hilda Warren Signed Liked
Date: 05/14/06 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 Part 1

I liked the way you showed that he has kinda a special attraction to Lauri because he had invited her for Xmas. Though I still would wish to see how he feels and thinks. You can put his POV in italics.

How does Lauri really feel about him?Has she developed a kind of interest in him or all what she's looking for is a good refference letter at the end of her contract? Would she, eventually, consider sleeping with him, out of attraction not in needs for refence?

Author's Response: i really wanna keep it a one person story. i thought about making it his POV too when i first began, but i know i couldn\'t write it the way i want it to be presented. hopefully soon his intentions will clear up. as for lauri, no one knows how she really feels, not even herself. dont worry, there is ALOT more story left for her to figure herself out.

Reviewer: Hilda Warren Signed Liked
Date: 05/16/06 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17 Part 2

This chapter made me feel that Nick kinda likes to hang around with Lauri. Is he trying to be nice?I guess so. I love his childish behaviour!:)
Also very intriguing is the headline...has Sara or Kendall something to do with it? You better update sooner:))

Author's Response: i love childish Nick too, its fun to write! i\'ll update as soon as possible, i\'ve already been putting some to paper :)

Reviewer: Hilda Warren Signed Liked
Date: 05/27/06 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

This chapter made Nicky childish again! The article was cute! well, I have the feeling that secretly, Lauri kinda likes Nick. And so does Nick. Actually, I think he didn't want to clear the dating mess caused by the article. Underwater pant unbuttoning rocks!!:))

Author's Response: yeah, underwater pants buttoning is kinda fun! ;) lol.