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The Review Challenge!
alota_cookin:
Okay...I just read the newly posted chapter of My Happy Ending by Sakabelle. Here is what I gave her for this chap:
aaaw. planning a wedding sucks! I am in the middle of trying to get mine together (its in July) and I am so stressed out...it's not even funny! I totally blew up at him this weekend, it was crazy. lol. that, in itself, will probably add a few more dramatic moments to thier life! I'll be interested to see what happens between them during all this. Oh wait...what I meant to say was..."Good chapter, update soon" LMAO *wink*
LenniluvsBrian:
If I remember, the next review I leave for a story I'll post here - provided it's not for No Matter What - lol. Yes, I R&R that fic - I don't always know what's going on - & I like it that way - lol.
~Lenni~
mare:
Here is my review for Julilly's latest chapter of Hawk and a Handsaw which you should all go check out if you haven't already. It's a very creative anf original idea :)
Wow once again big kudos to you for updating. I have to say i'm a little on the confuzzled side with this chapter. It felt a little rushed and like Julie said, i'm not sure whether she is dead or alive or in some kind of pergatory state. Getting hit over the head with a bottle kind of did it for me. Can a ghost get hit over the head with a bottle? Unless the guy that did it was also a ghost, then that would suck. I'd hate to know that when I died someone could actually hurt me! That would suck monkey butts! I loved the backstory on Val's suicide. You has a great imagination miss Julilly which is why I's loves you soo much! And now I realize since i've left you a mini book this probably won't take. Was she hit with a bottle? No lol it was the butt of a gun wasn't it? I have the rentention of a goldfish. What? Did someone say something? Where am I?
starbeamz:
lmfao mare
lovely review ;D maybe i should post mine to hers as well, since her story is really the only fanfic I've been keeping up with anymore. *goes off to find review*
starbeamz:
found it! it's not the best review ever, since the best ones I leave are apparently always for Kelly for whatever reason lol But, um, here goes nothing:
*teeny squeee*
Hmm, so things are starting to make a little more sense now. I doubt you'll make Brian kill himself, too, but, with you, I've come to expect the unexpected lol Anyway, I'm starting to see how the IAB investigation and Nick's death might be linked, but I'm going to keep mum on it until you write more (however long we have to wait on that lol). I'm glad you updated as it was yet another awesome chapter! Yay, Julilly!
Ooh, also. There should be a sentence break where there isn't one: From what he’d seen there were even people who recognized her and spoke to her as if they were friends and coworkers the possibility that it was all a ruse just seemed unlikely to him.
I think there's supposed to be a period between "the possibility" and "coworkers"...right? right?
I couldn't help but turn into the grammar police lol
And, Julilly, I might just tell you my theory, but it might be too amazing for you to handle....AMAZ INGLY WRONG bwahahah lol :P
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