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The Swollen Issues Series in under 1000 words, re-enacted by bunnies
« Reply #15 on: April 26, 2009, 01:25:04 AM »

Okay, first entry!  I combined the Book-a-Minute approach with the bunnies and came up with the following.

Presenting...

The Swollen Issues Series
in under 1000 words, re-enacted by bunnies



Chapter 1…

Bruce, the asshole manager:  Nick, are you feeling alright?

Nick:  Yad, I tink I’m geddin a cold.


After several days of Nick embarrassing himself in Japan…

Nick:  … On second thought, no.  I’m weak, I’m dizzy, I’m nauseous, I can’t stop puking, and my balls have swollen to the size of cantaloupes.  By the way, Leighanne, I’m impressed that you somehow managed to earn a minor in Japanese language in between all your modeling and acting jobs.

Leighanne:  Thanks!  Oh, and sorry about your balls.

Nick:  Yeah, suck my balls-  I mean, my balls suck!  I mean, the situation with my balls sucks, not that I want you to suck my balls!

Leighanne:  Thanks for clearing that up.

Nick:  No problem.  I just hope this bug clears up!  *passes out*

Kevin:  Call the doctor!

Doctor:  Mr. Carter, you have a nasty case of… the MUMPS!


After twenty-eight chapters in which Nick does not recover from “the mumps”…

Different Doctor:  Nick, I have some bad news for you.  You have a nasty case of… CANCER!

Nick:  Oh noes!


After a month of radiation…

Nick:  I’m tired, I’m nauseous, I have a fever, I have a headache, I don’t have an appetite, and my whole life is a lie!


After several more chapters in which Nick lives a lie…

Brian:  Nick, do you have an eating disorder?

Nick:  No, I have CANCER!

Brian:  Damn!

Narrator:  There was no way that Brian could forget the words that Nick had said.  After all, it wasn’t every day that you heard that your friend had cancer.  Was it?

Readers:  Um.  No?


After fourteen chapters of crying and puking and a play date with Julie (not me Julie; the Julie in the story)…

Brian:  I’m going to be a dad!  I’m going to have a baby boy!  My own NBA player!!  I love life!!!

Nick:  Cool!  Life still sucks for me!


After several more chapters of puking…

AJ:  Brian, is Nick on drugs?

Brian:  No.

Kevin:  Is Nick… sick?

Brian:  Mhm…

Howie:  Does Nick have cancer?

Brian:  Yeah… yeah, he’s got cancer.  He’s got Hodgkin’s Disease, and I’m not sure he will make it!

AJ, Kevin, and Howie:  *gasp*


After many chapters of cussing and crying and, of course, puking…

Nick:  I’m quitting my chemo!  I want to die!

Brian:  Noes, you can’t do that!

Nick:  Okay, fine, I don’t want to die!


After some more chapters in which Nick’s attention-seeking family makes an appearance…

Dr. Andersen:  The cancer has spread to your liver.  I’m so sorry, but there’s nothing I can do… except put you through further treatments, more tests, more chemo, more radiation… basically torture you for one hundred and ten more chapters, until you’re finally put out of your misery.  Did I mention I was sorry?

Nick:  Nooooooes!


Swollen Issues III…

Nick:  Ughhh… kill me now…

Dr. Andersen:  I’m sorry, but Nick has developed [insert complication here].

Brian:  He can’t die!  Please Lord…

AJ:  Praise Jesus, he’s aliiiiive!

Howie:  Hey, it looks like Nick’s getting better!

Kevin:  Oh noes, a setback!  Back to your deathbed in the hospital, Nick.

Aaron:  *whine*  Please don’t die, Nick. *whimper*

Jane:  Nick, you feel up to talking to this reporter, don’t you?

Nick:  Ughhh… kill me now…


After ninety chapters of this cycle, during which Nick suffers, Aaron whimpers and whines, Jane goes about her usual Jane Carter antics, the Boys comfort Nick while worrying behind his back, Leighanne has her baby, and Nick has potty problems…

AJ:  What’s the matter?  You gonna puke again?

Nick:  No… I… need… bathroom…

Narrator:  The diarrhea worked fast, and before AJ had a chance to help him out of the bed, there was another mess. This time Nick couldn't take it and started to cry.

Nurse:  Uh-oh, we got a Code Brown here!


And in the end… (spoiler warning!)

Heart monitor:  Beep… beep… beeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeee ep…

Brian:  Noes!

Kevin:  He’s gone…



THE END!
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Re: The April challenge
« Reply #16 on: April 26, 2009, 01:31:01 AM »

LMFAO Julie! You just made my night! Rock on!
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Re: The April challenge
« Reply #17 on: April 26, 2009, 01:33:23 AM »

LMAO thank you! ;D
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Re: The April challenge
« Reply #18 on: April 26, 2009, 01:44:42 AM »

I can't stop laughing!!!!  I'm like this right now  :'(...Julie you're sense of humor is so warped...I freakin love it!!  The pics just add soooooo much!! Code Brown!!!!!! lmao!!! Great job...loved it!
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Re: The April challenge
« Reply #19 on: April 26, 2009, 07:08:42 AM »

LMFAO. The BSB-Bunnies are hysterical.

"Different Doctor:  Nick, I have some bad news for you.  You have a nasty case of… CANCER!

Nick: Oh noes!"

Yes, those are the line(s) that sold me on this one. LOL. Too funny. Loved it!
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Re: The April challenge
« Reply #20 on: April 26, 2009, 08:23:53 AM »

Nice! That, indeed, was very comical!  :D My hubby is looking at me funny, because I'm sitting here chuckling, about it!
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Re: The April challenge
« Reply #21 on: April 26, 2009, 08:51:34 AM »

LMAO that was excellent!

Oh noes!!!
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Re: The April challenge
« Reply #22 on: April 26, 2009, 09:12:42 AM »

That was really great!!
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Re: The April challenge
« Reply #23 on: April 26, 2009, 09:16:33 AM »

I liked that far better than the original and it took about two years less time to read it!  :P No offence intended, of course, to the authors.
« Last Edit: April 26, 2009, 09:51:06 AM by julilly »
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Re: The April challenge
« Reply #24 on: April 26, 2009, 09:25:28 AM »

^ ditto!
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Re: The April challenge
« Reply #25 on: April 26, 2009, 09:45:56 AM »

Oh noes! Julie, you seriously are warped!! If I had the energy I'd do one of your stories lol....funny take on Swollen though...
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Re: The April challenge
« Reply #26 on: April 26, 2009, 10:11:50 AM »

LOL thanks, guys!!  I find that anytime you put "Oh noes!" in, it automatically gets funnier.
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Re: The April challenge
« Reply #27 on: April 26, 2009, 10:13:10 AM »

LOL. Yeah. Have you ever seen the "Plastic Winchesters" stuff? That was the first time I'd ever seen the "Oh Noes!!" thing and I swear I could *not* stop laughing until I about passed out from lack of oxygen.
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Re: The April challenge
« Reply #28 on: April 26, 2009, 10:17:05 AM »

LOL no... is that like Supernatural Winchesters?  Haven't seen it, but I probably picked it up from someone who has.
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Re: The April challenge
« Reply #29 on: April 26, 2009, 10:28:45 AM »

Yes, as in the Supernatural Winchesters. There's this girl(I think) who has set up "episodes" of Supernatural using Barbie dolls (Ken, anyway) and taking picutes/putting captions, making props. I've heard that she's gone youtube lately, but haven't seen any of those, but the picture/caption ones are absolutely hysterical. I'm behind a firewall that blocks livejournal so can't verify this is the right link these days, but http://anteka.livejournal.com/67179.html used to be the "episode guide" with all the links, etc.
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