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Author Topic: Felix Award for Best Suspense or Thriller (9)  (Read 5168 times)

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Felix Award for Best Suspense or Thriller (9)
« on: August 01, 2009, 04:29:47 PM »


Tony: Who do we want to talk to next?

Tim: How about Mare?

Tony *grins*: Good choice, Probie. I'll go invite her--

Ziva: Now is not the time. She is up for the next award I believe.

Tim: Good po--hey! Do you guys hear that?

Ziva: Someone is down that hallway!

*Tony draws his weapon and begins running toward the sound, Ziva and Tim close on his heals.*

They round the corner just in time to see a masked individual carrying a sack full of what appear to be envelopes disappear around the corner at the far end of the hall. Again they follow after and round the corner--where they discover the abandoned sack; with what appears to be a bomb securely attached to it; there is less than a minute left on the timer.

Tony: You two get back! I'll try to disarm it!

Tim: I think I have a better chance of--

Tony: I'm faster than you if we have to run for it.

*The seconds tick down quickly as Tim tries to talk Tony through the disarming. Sweat appears on each of their brows as the countdown approaches "Zero"

*Onstage*

Shawn: And the Felix for Best Suspense or Thriller goes to:



With runner up:


Mare: I don't know what to say. I'm very surprised this story won. Thanks so much for the nomination and to everyone who read it and gave me feedback. I wanted to give up on this one. In fact, it was almost the first story I have ever thought of discontinuing. Now i'm kind of glad I didn't.

Kevin: So are we! Do you think we like it when you leave us stuck at gunpoint?

Nick: Yeah!

AJ (sarcastically): You tell her, Nick...

Nick: Oh! And stop torturing me!

*Back in the hall*

Ziva: Five more seconds, Tony!

*Tony curses under his breath as he turns to flee, diving at the last moment before the bomb goes off*

*There's a small *pop* sound, and the 3 agents look up from their duck-and-cover positions to see that there is now a tiny little fire quickly burning through the envelopes.

*Tim takes off his jacket and quickly puts out the flames. Unfortunately, there is little left of the envelopes--just enough to reveal the winner for "Best Action Fic", verifying that Shawn Spencer, was, indeed correct.

Ziva: You do not suppose that Shawn did it, do you?

Tim: Well, he does seem to know who the actual winners are, and the results have been sealed up until tonight.

Ziva: And I do not believe in psychics.

*The others nod in agreement*

Tim: I'm going to call Abby and get her over here. See if she can tell us anything about the...can we even call that a bomb?

Go on to the Next Award

« Last Edit: August 01, 2009, 07:33:24 PM by julilly »
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Re: Felix Award for Best Suspense or Thriller (9)
« Reply #1 on: August 01, 2009, 07:34:09 PM »

Mare and Honey, two very worthy competitors! Congrats!
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Re: Felix Award for Best Suspense or Thriller (9)
« Reply #2 on: August 01, 2009, 07:35:56 PM »

Congrats to Mare and Honey!
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Re: Felix Award for Best Suspense or Thriller (9)
« Reply #3 on: August 01, 2009, 07:36:35 PM »

Congrats Mare and Kelly! :D
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Re: Felix Award for Best Suspense or Thriller (9)
« Reply #4 on: August 01, 2009, 07:37:37 PM »

Congrats!
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Re: Felix Award for Best Suspense or Thriller (9)
« Reply #5 on: August 01, 2009, 07:40:36 PM »

Congrats Mare and Kelly!!!
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Re: Felix Award for Best Suspense or Thriller (9)
« Reply #6 on: August 01, 2009, 07:52:00 PM »

Thanks guys, and especially congrats, Mare!
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Re: Felix Award for Best Suspense or Thriller (9)
« Reply #7 on: August 01, 2009, 09:30:49 PM »

Thanks guys and congrats Kelly! Yay to bsb torture. I need to stop posting because I keep getting lost lol
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Re: Felix Award for Best Suspense or Thriller (9)
« Reply #8 on: August 01, 2009, 09:53:33 PM »

Congrats!!!
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Re: Felix Award for Best Suspense or Thriller (9)
« Reply #9 on: August 02, 2009, 06:11:33 AM »

Congrats Mare and Kelly :)
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Re: Felix Award for Best Suspense or Thriller (9)
« Reply #10 on: August 04, 2009, 04:49:41 PM »

Congrats Mare, Kelly! Mare, maybe this is the motivation YOU need in order to finish your story!
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Re: Felix Award for Best Suspense or Thriller (9)
« Reply #11 on: August 04, 2009, 09:07:49 PM »

I did finish this one! lol
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