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shadesmaclean/Tradewinds updates
« on: December 11, 2010, 04:15:44 AM »

Been meaning to do this for a couple days...

Tradewinds 01: The Islands

http://www.absolutechaos.net/viewstory.php?sid=10379

Summary: In the tropical islands of another dimension, the journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step, as one boy's life is blown way off course...
Categories: Original Fiction Characters: OC Genres: Adventure, Fantasy, Science Fiction
Rated: PG-13 Warnings: Death, Violence
Series: Tradewinds Challenges: None
Published: 12/08/10

This is the first part of a series I've been working on for more than a decade-- since I was in high school-- but this is the third incarnation of it, rewritten from scratch. "Tradewinds" is the operative title I originally gave the series, inspired by all the stories my friends and I made up together when when we were kids, fleshed-out and adapted into a more coherent narrative, and the name kinda stuck. The story itself is an adventure that stands with one foot firmly planted in both science fiction and fantasy. Set in another dimension, these first few parts telling the intertwining tale of several characters, of ancient martial arts and hi-tech weapons, forgotten secrets and those who seek them, and the beginning of their epic journey to haunted places and lost realms…

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The Island was a lost treasure.

A rare gem, indeed, an emerald star that took no part in any constellation, gleaming all alone in its own corner of an endless sky men called the Ocean. Many miles out of anyone’s way, it was a pristine place, unseen by human eyes and untouched by human hands. So it seemed destined to remain for the Ages.

Or at least until today.

For as the sun slowly rose from its nightly swim, as the eternal waves emerged from untold depths, to the faint chorus of life echoing through the morning mist in the jungle beyond the beach, the light of dawn shone on a young man who lay sprawled out on the sand.

Barely more than a boy, really, but tall for his age. His light brown, almost blond, hair was damp and caked with the same ancient sand as his ragged clothes. If not for the breath of life he still had in him, he would be hard to discern from the rest of the half-buried junk strewn across that stretch of beach.

Now these things were the only lingering hint of last night’s storm.

A moan every bit as ragged as his appearance escaped him as he lifted his head and tried to prop himself up on one arm. But try was all he could do, for he was exhausted so soon after his ordeal at sea. He got only a brief, bleary glimpse of the beach before his head crashed back into the sand.

Sand that his hands, for all anyone knew, may have been the first to ever claw their fingers through, and whose eyes may well have been the first to ever behold. He would do no more of either again for some time.

Chapters 1-3 are already up, and I just added chapter 4. Hope you enjoy the ride!  8-)
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Re: shadesmaclean/Tradewinds updates
« Reply #1 on: December 12, 2010, 04:01:49 AM »

Chapter 5 of Tradewinds 1 is up now.  8-)
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Re: shadesmaclean/Tradewinds updates
« Reply #2 on: December 13, 2010, 03:38:32 AM »

Chapter 6 is up now, and things are have taken a turn for the worse...  :o
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Re: shadesmaclean/Tradewinds updates
« Reply #3 on: December 14, 2010, 03:17:48 AM »

Chapters 7 and 8 are up.

Take 2, they're small!  ;)
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Re: shadesmaclean/Tradewinds updates
« Reply #4 on: December 15, 2010, 03:57:32 AM »

9 and 10, another couple short chapters.  ;D
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Re: shadesmaclean/Tradewinds updates
« Reply #5 on: December 16, 2010, 04:02:00 AM »

Chapter 11 is up, the turning of the tide?  :stabbitystab:
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Re: shadesmaclean/Tradewinds updates
« Reply #6 on: December 17, 2010, 02:39:28 AM »

Chapter 12 is out, as things get further out of hand.  :stabbitystab:
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Re: shadesmaclean/Tradewinds updates
« Reply #7 on: December 18, 2010, 06:23:47 AM »

Chapter 13 is out, the battle getting still uglier...  :stabbitystab:
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Re: shadesmaclean/Tradewinds updates
« Reply #8 on: December 19, 2010, 05:48:37 AM »

And chapter 14, the tragic conclusion of Tradewinds Part 1.  :(
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Tradewinds 02
« Reply #9 on: December 20, 2010, 02:28:06 PM »

And now, Part 2...

Tradewinds 02: Paradise

http://www.absolutechaos.net/viewstory.php?sid=10394

Summary: Wherein Max makes a new friend, and begins to adjust to his new life, even as he tries to pick up the pieces…
Categories: Original Fiction Characters: OC Genres: Adventure, Fantasy, Science Fiction
Rated: PG-13 Warnings: Violence
Series: Tradewinds Challenges: None
Published: 12/20/10

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Max felt something warm, wet and abrasive rub across his face.

He vaguely remembered having a dream about waking up on a beach… After being chased out at sea after… what had to be the worst nightmare of his life…

After a moment he became aware of the fact that he was lying on sun-warmed sand. He wondered why he was so tired… Of course, it made perfect sense to be exhausted after such a rigorous ordeal… He knew he must have tossed and turned all night to be this worn out…

Then he felt that strange sensation on his face again, tugging his senses still further into the here and now.

“What’s going on…” he muttered. He dug his fingers through the sand, finding that he still barely had enough strength to make a fist.

Experimentally, he opened his eyes.

He cried out in alarm and confusion as he looked up into the feline face staring down at him. Max rolled away with a yelp. For its part, the creature leaped away in the opposite direction.

Max pulled himself together, as quickly as one could be expected to after waking up in a place right out of a dream. He had to close his eyes for a moment to ward off the dizziness and headache that assaulted his eyes, making him see spots. After all, he was still very sore and stiff; he now knew that he was moving too quickly just yet. As he opened his eyes again and became more aware of his surroundings, it didn’t take him long to figure out their one stark implication: that had been no dream.

Max immediately focused on the creature before him, a cat of some variety. It sat over a foot tall, with short white-and-black fur of curiously symmetrical pattern, even on both sides. The cat, a cub of some feline variety that reminded him of a statue back in Layosha, sat and stared warily at Max. In those greenish-yellow eyes, disproportiona tely large on its young face, Max saw his own reflection for a second.

Though the cub had been startled by Max’s sudden reaction, it had already begun to recover its feline composure, and its look was now one of cautious curiosity…

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Re: shadesmaclean/Tradewinds updates
« Reply #10 on: December 21, 2010, 06:19:34 AM »

Chapter 2 is up, as Max makes a new friend...  :simba:
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Re: shadesmaclean/Tradewinds updates
« Reply #11 on: December 22, 2010, 07:53:30 AM »

Chapter 3 is out, as Max learns the joys of homesickness.. :(
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Re: shadesmaclean/Tradewinds updates
« Reply #12 on: December 23, 2010, 06:02:21 AM »

Chapter 4 is out, in which Max continues to explore the island with his new feline friend...  :simba:
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Re: shadesmaclean/Tradewinds updates
« Reply #13 on: December 24, 2010, 05:52:30 AM »

Chapter 5 is out, as Max begins to explore the interior of the island...  :simba:
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Re: shadesmaclean/Tradewinds updates
« Reply #14 on: December 25, 2010, 06:53:07 AM »

Chapter 6 is out, and Max comes up with a name for his feline friend.  :simba:

HAPPY HOLIDAYS, AC!
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