It's not another new update idea, just added number two to the list of reworked chapters...
And since it's not really new, I'll give you a preview...
"Minako’s eyes grew wide as she cupped her hand to her mouth, desperately trying not to cry, scream, or vomit. It was terrible… No, horrifying… He was a tall man. His solemn, yet happy, face seemed tired, worn, and alone. Before the rest of his facial features came into view, his crystalline blue eyes pierced through the darkness. Whatever light managed to exist in this place reflected off his fair hair. But did all of this make him a man? A few inconsistencie s with that theory existed. If he was indeed an average man, why did horns sit nestled among his fair hair? And why did his hands and feet end in claws? His whip-like tail seemed to wag in delight and the limply resting large, flesh colored wings on his back were impossible to ignore. Was he even human? She had seen them in books before, creatures of the underworld. Demons who were half-man, half-beast, and decorated in chains, beckoning the world’s misguided souls to the depths of their fiery abyss. They were composite creatures, born from the sinful souls of the misguided man. And yet, to live in this blackened abyss, was he more sinful than any mere man? Still, his demonic characteristic s were more than composite, they were almost mystical, resembling the legendary dragon. But those composite demons–minions of the fiery abyss–did not possess wings at all; wings belonged to the angels of Heaven. The strongest of all the demons, after all, was the devil called Lucifer, an angel that had fallen from Heaven for his sinful heart. And then, to further pull himself from God, he pierced his own wrists with chains to destroy his wings; he became a composite monster, the torso of a man and the hind legs and horns of a goat. Wings and chains… Minako backed away from him slowly. This terrible satanic minion probably had his way with girls like her… before he ate them for breakfast. His clawed hands fingered the lock on the door; the chains rang against the bars. His claws were like keys; the lock opened with ease. He stepped into the cage that contained the girls. Minako was not sure how many rested in this cage, but she remembered the infinite pairs of gleaming, yellow eyes that always observed her through the darkness. All of them now hid in the shadows and she was left alone. The girls had made her Saint George and chosen her to fight the dragon. Minako continued to step away from the door as the metronome within her heart kept setting its tempo even faster. The creature now stood within the prison, towering over all of its inhabitants as the giant monster who would reign above their city."
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