Well I rewrote and finished up this beginning part. I think it came out okay, but I'm going to look back at it tomorrow. I wanna add one more part and then maybe I'll share. This sounds kinda dumb, but I'm really self conscious almost like I'm a brand new writer if that makes sense. Not sure if my idea will be well received. Let's just say it is the classic anti-romance that I like to write lol.