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Engarde!!!! The Reading Duel challenge
cabybakes:
--- Quote from: Rose on July 22, 2011, 08:28:53 PM ---I'm guilty of using songs to hit where a character is at lol. I've gotten better about it, but I get that. You know, I just read Chapter 5, when did you write that chapter? I found it hit pretty well where Nick's at now. Only now he likes the gym more LOL.
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I started this story in 2008, I think? Lol...this Nick is Julilly's post pothead Nick...ha!
Rose:
--- Quote from: cabybakes on July 22, 2011, 08:39:21 PM ---I started this story in 2008, I think? Lol...this Nick is Julilly's post pothead Nick...ha!
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LMAO.
You nailed him pretty well, especially seeng how he is now, 3 years later. :)
julilly:
--- Quote from: cabybakes on July 22, 2011, 08:39:21 PM ---I started this story in 2008, I think? Lol...this Nick is Julilly's post pothead Nick...ha!
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Post pothead Nick, I like it lol
cabybakes:
--- Quote from: Rose on July 22, 2011, 08:58:43 PM ---LMAO.
You nailed him pretty well, especially seeng how he is now, 3 years later. :)
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Thanks!!!
Purpura Lipstick:
--- Quote from: colorguard_diva on July 22, 2011, 07:53:10 PM ---I'm reading Room 438. I've read the first 6 chapters. The first few chapters moved slow for me, but chapters five and six moved faster and it's setting the main part of the storyline.
Kevin and Danielle's relationship seems a little strained when they are together. More on her part then Kevin's.
I like that their are two people stalking definitely makes it more exciting, especially since one is close to Danielle. I didn't see that comimg.
I'm looking forward to reading more.
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This is one of the first stories I wrote where the girl and a guy had a relationship before the story started. I will admit I am awkward with writing relationships between guys and girls in general. It is definitely something I'm trying to improve. Thanks for the comments.
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