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Engarde!!!! The Reading Duel challenge
colorguard_diva:
Julie, for some reason I seem to give Brian flaws. He is the sweet guy, but does things that aren't so boy- next door. Even in the current story I'm writing he's flawed, even more so, but not as in your face.
Carter-Orange:
I've made a start on You Give Love A Bad Name and so far, I'm enjoying it. Nick and Tracy have just got married, but I sense that trouble is ahead and I can't wait to see what that is :)
It's well written and to the point, which makes it easy for the reader to follow.
FrickingKaos:
Thank you Steph!!! I put myself in the story but you will see what happens to me lol. I am not the main character. Glad you like it!
Carter-Orange:
I'm on Chapter 18 now. It could do with being a bit more descriptive in places, but it's a nice quick and easy read. I think Amanda should've had someone cover for her at the club so that she could take some maternity leave. In reality, there is no way you'd go straight back to work after giving birth. But in fiction I suppose anything is possible!
FrickingKaos:
I can see what you mean, Steph. Amanda is the owner/boss so I didn't feel it was needed to mention maternity leave, but thanks for pointing it out! Mind you I did write this two or three years ago! Thanks for the feedback, it helps a lot!
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