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The Writing Thread: Orlando Passaggio (aka The Writing Thread 3)
RokofAges75:
--- Quote from: mare on April 08, 2021, 03:18:59 AM ---Sorry I’ve been gone. I know I said I’d answer those questions and then disappeared. lol now I have no idea where they even are.
I didn’t get my vaccine yet. Not happening until end of April. Yes, I did drop my cheesecake and burnt my right hand as a result. Luckily I’m left handed and the cheesecake tasted (tastes) pretty good. I made whipped cream to cover up the huge portion that ended up in the garbage.
I’m on both twitter and Facebook more than I’d like to admit. I’m far more vocal on Facebook as opposed to twitter. I just kind of use twitter as my lifeline to bsb. That’s how I find out what’s going on and any gossip. I have taken a vacation from many of my facebook friends who were Magats but for some reason I can’t bring myself to unfriend anyone on there. I do have an Instagram but I rarely use it. I tend to get lost for long periods of time scrolling through my good reads app.
I never listen to podcasts. They don’t seem to hold my attention. There’s no way I’d pay to listen to one or pay to read a fanfic. I would imagine once people are paid for fanfics, copyright infringement becomes a thing.
I’m sure there’s a lot more I missed but that’s what I got for now
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nicksgal:
--- Quote from: mare on April 08, 2021, 01:48:18 AM ---Orbs will always continue to be annoying!
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--- Quote from: RokofAges75 on April 08, 2021, 08:12:44 PM ---As long as it's face balls and not "black balls of sight," like someone said on Reddit LOL.
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That one made me laugh! lol I notice that Mare didn't specifically mention an issue with "face balls" either, so... Here we are, face balls, lol.
--- Quote from: mare on April 08, 2021, 01:48:18 AM ---For whatever reason, my brain cannot properly absorb the word sidled. I can’t ever hear that word when I am reading it. It’s like my brain refuses to comprehend it. Odd
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--- Quote from: RokofAges75 on April 08, 2021, 08:18:21 PM ---That is interesting. I don't mind the word sidled.
I have maybe a similar thing with the word/color "mauve." Since I was a kid, I have always pronounced it how it looks, like "mahv." Then I found out as an adult that it's apparently pronounced with a long O sound, like "mohv"? But in my head, I continue to pronounce it with a "ah" sound because it just sounds better to me that way. LOL
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I think that happens a lot when you only see a word in print and never hear it. There's one that always used to get me until recently, but I can't think of what it is now. Colonel got me a lot as a child because there isn't an "r" in it, but that's how we pronounce it in America, at least... I don't know about England, so I don't want to blanket this with "in English."
RokofAges75:
--- Quote from: nicksgal on April 08, 2021, 09:04:22 PM ---I think that happens a lot when you only see a word in print and never hear it. There's one that always used to get me until recently, but I can't think of what it is now. Colonel got me a lot as a child because there isn't an "r" in it, but that's how we pronounce it in America, at least... I don't know about England, so I don't want to blanket this with "in English."
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Absolutely! "Colonel" is a good one too. I have seen a quote shared many times that says, "Never make fun of someone if they mispronounce a word. It means they learned it by reading."
nicksgal:
--- Quote from: RokofAges75 on April 08, 2021, 08:12:44 PM ---I don't get the hate for "chuckle" either. I think of it as a quiet laugh too, not a full-blown belly laugh, but more of a "heh heh" like you said. It's more of a masculine word than "giggle," which sounds more feminine to me. I like the word "snicker" better, but I think "snicker" has a slightly different connotation - I tend to use it more when characters are reacting to a dirty joke or making fun of each other.
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All I can guess is that people think that since the word looks weird, the laugh must sound weird? I don't know that I picture it as even just a "heh" or "heh heh," unless it's Nick, a quiet kind of throaty laugh is where it is in my head, like you want to conceal it, but not actively or it's a little funny, but not a lot funny. I don't tend to use giggle for males either, because it feels too high pitched.
I think "snicker" has some nasally aspects to it and mocking? "Half-suppressed, typically scornful" is the definition, so yeah, teasing each other is a good time to use that.
"Chortle," that's another weird synonym for laugh.
--- Quote from: RokofAges75 on April 08, 2021, 08:12:44 PM ---There was also a lot of hate for "smirk" on that thread, but that may just be because it's overused in fanfic. I remember that video we discussed a while back about things fanfic writers do that don't fly in published writing talking about characters who smirk too much. I'm guilty as charged with that one because my Nick smirks all the time... but that's because real Nick does that smirky half-smile all the time too!
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I saw that too. I think there was one comment where someone was describing a character who smirks all the time, and I think that's where the line for these might come into play for me? Like if everybody's wandering around smirking at everything all the time, then that's just weird. If it's one character wandering around smirking at everything all the time, then that's just that character. Replace "smirk" with whatever in this case. But then there's always a worry that it starts to feel like "Is my character Bella Swan biting her lip?" and that's unpleasant too!
Aww, Nick's lopsided smile/grin! That's how I always describe it. :) In my most recently posted chapter, he had a nice flirty lopsided smile and later a lopsided gape. Good times were had by all. :) I figure y'all know what I mean, but that's another thing that I wrote this week and went, "ah, the first time I ever mention this, I have to explain exactly what it looks like in the OF version."
(Also, now "One Phone Call" is stuck in my head.)
--- Quote from: RokofAges75 on April 08, 2021, 08:12:44 PM ---Besides "orbs," the only one I really agreed with on that thread was the various awkward synonyms for "penis." I know we've already discussed that here. I don't read a lot of smut, so it probably bothers me more in my own stories when I'm trying to come up with a word that doesn't sound too vulgar or too technical/medical.
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Agreed. Though no one mentioned "impaled," so... lol.
--- Quote from: RokofAges75 on April 08, 2021, 08:12:44 PM ---Back in the Broken/BMS era, the word "stump" used to make me cringe. Even when it was completely out of context, like on a sign for "tree stump removal, it would automatically make me think of poor Broken Nick, and I would feel this surge of guilt. I have gotten over that the further removed I've become from those stories, but it lasted for a few years.
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LMAO! Sorry about your guilt, but I'm dying that tree stumps made you think of Broken Nick, lol!
nicksgal:
--- Quote from: mare on April 08, 2021, 03:18:59 AM ---Sorry I’ve been gone. I know I said I’d answer those questions and then disappeared. lol now I have no idea where they even are.
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Just glad you're okay and making cheesecakes, lol.
--- Quote from: mare on April 08, 2021, 03:18:59 AM ---I didn’t get my vaccine yet. Not happening until end of April. Yes, I did drop my cheesecake and burnt my right hand as a result. Luckily I’m left handed and the cheesecake tasted (tastes) pretty good. I made whipped cream to cover up the huge portion that ended up in the garbage.
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Sorry you burned your hand, but glad you were able to salvage the burnt part of your cheesecake and can still use your dominant hand. Burnt hands are no joke. End of April is soon! Yay!
--- Quote from: mare on April 08, 2021, 03:18:59 AM ---I’m on both twitter and Facebook more than I’d like to admit. I’m far more vocal on Facebook as opposed to twitter. I just kind of use twitter as my lifeline to bsb. That’s how I find out what’s going on and any gossip. I have taken a vacation from many of my facebook friends who were Magats but for some reason I can’t bring myself to unfriend anyone on there. I do have an Instagram but I rarely use it. I tend to get lost for long periods of time scrolling through my good reads app.
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Y'all are my lifeline to BSB at this point. And sometimes Instagram. I figure they post most of the same stuff on instagram and I get to look at great photos.
--- Quote from: mare on April 08, 2021, 03:18:59 AM ---I’m sure there’s a lot more I missed but that’s what I got for now
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