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Author Topic: Ice Cold Blood  (Read 1709 times)


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Ice Cold Blood
« on: September 02, 2010, 05:33:56 AM »

Just wondering if anyone could beta read my fanfic Ice Cold Blood. I know I'm not a complete horror at grammar and spelling (cause I'm a grammar and spelling nazi myself LOL).
I'm just wondering if there are certain sentence constructions that should be fixed, or maybe some punctuation or lay-out concerning paragraphs.

Even when there are grammar/spelling mistakes, I'd love to know!