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Reviewer: Poster_Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 50

Somehow I knew Kay would mention this. And yet, I still almost cried while reading it.



Author's Response: I know...it was tough to write. I hope you guys don't mind the switch in writing...I just have this feeling that as Kay's pregnancy goes along she's scattered between journal writing, everyday life, and inner monologue. It's tricky. :S

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 50

Yay yay the twins are born yay hehe. Kay and Noah should be able to let someone adopt the baby, and it should be Baylee and Marcie. Hehe amazing job looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 50

Noah didn't finish. He was crying. Our nerves were finally frayed to the last bit. I wrapped my arms around his waist and we cried together.

As sad as it was, it felt right. After we calmed down, we decided to wait until Liv got home and was settled with the twins before we told the parentals. We were worried about what they might say, but in the end, we agreed that we had to stick together.

If we only did one resopnsible thing in our lives, it was going to be this. It had to be our choice.

What a beautiful and mature choice to make.

Author's Response: Noah and Kay have such a different dynamic than Shelby and Mason. I know while writing Shel's story that for as much as she thought about everything, in the end she would succeed as a teen mom even though it was going to be hard. I really don't feel Kay's ready. And I agree...it is a beautiful and mature choice to make. :)

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 49

AaaWww reality check finally happened hehe amazing job can't wait for more.

Days aren't the same with out ur updates. Hehe

Author's Response: I have another update that will be posted later tonight...almost done with it. Yet again, work gets in the way lol. j/k

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 49

OH BOY! Welcome to REAL WORLD, sweeties!

hahahahah I love Liv and Landon!
NO SEX! haha too late, doll!

''Landon had decided he was going to make Noah 'look better.'
There were toys everywhere. Something that I prayed was green Play-doh was smashed in the carpet.
And Landon was jumping up and down beside me on the couch.
"HAPPY NEW YEAR! HAPPY NEW YEAR!" he shouted over and over again.''
--Noah looks better.. mmmm... all those cookies for a kid? Oh dear, you have SO much to learn in 5 months! Landon is our lill Carter Chipmunked!!! Love that kid! He sooo loves his mom.... okay... too much even...


''It was like night-and-day. Whenever I saw Landon, he was always cute and happy and saying adorable things. I still remembered what a well behaved ring bearer he was at Shelby and Mason's wedding. That was only like six weeks ago. I was seriously worried that between now and then he had been possessed by the devil.
Noah turned; I didn't see what happened, but I can only assume Landon's foot connected with his groin. All of a sudden, Landon was on the ground and so was Noah. Landon scrambled to his feet and took off for parts unknown. Noah moaned.
"Are you okay?"
"Just. Kill. Me."
--This is how kids grows, Kay! hahaha Kill you, Noah? Welcome to real LIFE!

YES, her bubble had officially been popped. YES!
Oh and Bay... Congrats!!

Author's Response: LoL Landon's too-much...squared! haha :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 49

It's about time. lol Nice trap set by everyone for Kay and Noah. lol

Author's Response: LoL I can just see Bri, Leigh, Liv, and Nick saying 'see ya!' 'bye!' and the look on those two's faces...

Reviewer: NeelaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 49

awwwwwwwwww Kaybug ... you will do fine

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 49

Oye vey in a half shell. I understand why they did it, but c'mon. Is it wise to stress out & upset a pregnant girl? Kayleigh does always get the damned short end of the stick too.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: LoL yeah, Kay was born with the short stick. :S

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great Reality Check!!! LOVED IT. I wondered if they were going to fare okay like Shelby and Mason, but the reality of the situation made it all that much better!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 49

Great chap! I'm glad that Kay got a reality check...that's definitely more like motherhood.

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 49

poor kay... landon is sort of out of control



Author's Response: feeding him cookies didn't help...lol just sayin'

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 49

I am very glad her bubble has burst finally. I hope they come to a decision and soon, either adoption or........well who knows maybe she'll wisen up by then. Though i have to say having them go through it with Landon being five is a bit more cruel then what shelby and mason went through when he was an infant, at least as an infant landon didn't talk back lol. I'm very glad that she has taken an interest in school and i hope it continues and she finds what she would like to do with the rest of her life.



Author's Response: It was so Liv's idea...and you're right. A four year old Landon is probably the worst thing to stick those two with, but it got through to them!

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 49

well it is about time both come back down the reall world well done to Landon still love him though, that was gr8 plan makes me think that Liv thought of it.

another gr8 update



Author's Response: I still love Landon. He makes life interesting. :) Liv SO thought of it!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 04:00 am Title: Chapter 48

i hope u update today :)



Author's Response: No update today..maybe tomorrow...I'm still on semi-seclusion :)

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 01:48 am Title: Chapter 48

Oh my goodness. I think that both Kayleigh and Noah need to grow up a litte. Kayleigh is still thinking everything is going to be wonderful.

All Noah does is think about sex. That's about all he seems to want to do.

I think they both need to think about what is going to happen in the future. We are all concerned about how Kay's acting. I think Noah is just as naieve and dellusional. It seems like he doesn't want to discuss the baby situation.

I wish there parents would knock some sense into both of them. Maybe Marcie can have a talk with them.

Author's Response: Finally someone noticed that Kay's not the only one with an issue...my little Noah needs to get his head out of the southern f'ing hemisphere. I think Team Liv might have a game plan....