"Out of Order?" I asked. "How does a pool go Out of Order?"
Noah laughed. "I don't know, but I bet people won't question it."
---Well.... OUT just said what he was wanting.....


''I thought about how he had teased me about being afraid to be alone with him. I was afraid. I was afraid that he would tear down even more walls. My fingers curled around the worn knees on my jeans. Noah fell back and began to back paddle. The lights in the pool reflected off the water. It did look appealing.
In more ways than one.''
---Oh Boy..... this Carter is mmmm.. those genes rules!



''One thing's for sure...never trust a Carter. His hands went from my knees to my thighs. He slid my legs apart. I felt his hot breath. Without sight, my ears picked up on every sound. I waited for maybe a touch with a fingertip...something a curious boy would do. What I hadn't expected was his tongue. I gasped. My instinct was to open my eyes, but I couldn't.
The sound of the water lapping against the side of the pool fell into a rhythm with Noah's motions. My legs wrapped around his shoulders. I knew now the reason for the 'Out of Order' sign.
This was not a family pool anymore.''
---YES! YES! YYYYYYEEEEEEEESSSSSSSS!!!! He loved her.... oh Jen.... that was sensual! Oh that pool won't be the same EVER again!


''He was always prepared. I had to give the boy credit.''
--Well.... he has a good teacher after all. when you know what you want... GO FOR IT!


"Don't hold back," he said breathlessly. I shook my head.
There was no holding back with him. He was like a freakin' volcano.
Unlike the first time, there was a little more wildness in the moment. For one, we had commandeered a hotel pool. Secondly, Noah had just gone down on me and I was already hovering on the edge. And third...
Well, he was just that good.''
--He IS THAT good! He is AWWWWWWWWWWWW



"I'm not helping with your therapy."
I laughed. "It's our little secret."He wrapped a towel around his waist and pulled me close.
I loved how we smelled like chlorine and terry cloth and...love.''
---Oh NOW he thinks... oh well, it happened! You know she ALWAYS can blame: "He is a Carter!" Livvy will understand...


''I clapped excitedly. "Ah, you've crossed over!"
--She did it!! there will be two young men 'sleeping' at that room....



''I pressed my face against the pillow. The way things were going in L.A., it was going to be hell going back. I only had tomorrow. I'd go to Brooke's afternoon rehearsal, her concert and then head back to Atlanta the morning after. Noah would go back to Tampa.
The distance was going to suck.''
--Oh distance.... she will do things....
NEXT!!!

Author's Response: LoL I think 'It's a Carter thing' would make an AWESOME t-shirt. Just sayin. :) I love that Noah thinks after the fact. His dad does the same thing... :)

OH god, Nono you are sooooo like your dad and I loooove you even more for this :)
and well Nate is such a wonderful guy too :D they both got 2 amazing guys eeeeekkkk
haha and why not a sec backstreet grandchild carter would be a good grandpa lol and nono a good father ;) maybe a new story ;P
awesome job :D

Author's Response: Well the juries still out on the Nate/Trevor debatacle, lol. But NoNo...I'm so team Noah all the way haha

Kay seems to getting back to a normal life but I wonder if her being so close with Noah will ruin her therapy. And I wonder how Noah will react when he finds out about Brooke & Nate who I still do not trust. I just hope Kay goes forward in her therapy and that Brookes mistake doesn't haunt her.
Margueritre

Author's Response: Kay is getting close to him...emotions are a scary thing sometimes. And Noah's reaction if he finds out...might not be good, right?

Both Noah and Kay going away soon and Brooke all alone with two hot lookin guys.  Really Really hope i am wrong about Nate he better be one of the nice guys.

Oh Noah....why can't you be at least 10 to 15 years older and real! :) LOL

LOVE IT!! So happy for Kay.....didn't start out liking her so much, and now I luff her!!

Author's Response: LoL a male Carter spawn around my age would so be wonderful. :) I'm glad everyone changed their mind about Kay-d bug. She's totally misunderstood :)

--"Maybe she's sleeping," I said. Something told me she wasn't sleeping.-- My Kay-Kay knows these thing ;)

--"Out of Order?" I asked. "How does a pool go Out of Order?"-- I must say that it shows a big improvement in Kay already that she didn't think about sex when he took her to the pool w/o their suits...Noah's mind, however, is another story lmao!

--One thing's for sure...never trust a Carter.-- heeheehee, ain't that the truth... tho 9 times outta ten, it results in good stuff...

--There was no holding back with him. He was like a freakin' volcano.-- LMAO

--"I want to hear you scream," he growled in my ear.

"I won't give you the satisfaction," I teased with my last bit of sanity. He gave me a sultry smile.

"I give you less than a minute," he said.

He should have only given me thirty seconds because that's all he needed. There was a slight shifting, a booty grab, and a kiss that had me losing all bravado.

At least this time I didn't sob like a baby. This time was just for pleasure.-- 30 seconds... damn :)

--"Now do you know why the pool's out of order?" Noah teased. I pressed against his chest and pushed at him playfully.

"Shut up," I laughed.-- omg, i totally LOL'd at this :)

--Brooke shook her head. "I let my emotions run away with me. I need to figure out the Trevor situation."

I crawled into my own bed. I didn't see how she could backtrack, but I didn't say anything about it.-- I don't see any backtracking either... I just hope that Nate is truly as good as we all think. I swear, i one more guy hurts my BooBoo, they all go down ('cept Noah & Nicky, of course)

--I pressed my face against the pillow. The way things were going in L.A., it was going to be hell going back. I only had tomorrow. I'd go to Brooke's afternoon rehearsal, her concert and then head back to Atlanta the morning after. Noah would go back to Tampa.

The distance was going to suck.-- yes, yes it is. it's gonna suck royally :(

Finally she has someone that treats her like a lady. Now for her to talk to Trevor. I think they need to make peace. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite