Date: 10/21/10 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 32
i am only one that do not like idea that Nate and Noah sharing rooms :( well apart from Brooke lol hehe likey see never told Noah lol if she did Trev will not need to fight for Brooke love mmm come to think of it TELL HIM Brooke j/k. mmmm Noah and Nate sharing sounds like Nick think to do so funny.
Stoping them for kissing someone is so jealous
oh sat :( but hav fun loads and loads of it :)
Date: 10/21/10 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 32
--I know it doesn't sound like a big deal, but for me just being asked to go to a movie was something special. I had never had any real 'date' experience. My 'dates' had all taken place in closets or cars.
"I'd like that," I said softly. Then I thought of Brooke.-- I luv that Noah is taking her on a date. And I luv that even though it is the 'first date' she still thought of Brooke :)
--It was the small things that made me happy.-- aw, i think more people should realize life is all about the small things :)
--I suddenly felt like I was in an alternate version of Lady and the Tramp. Instead of meatballs, there was popcorn.
And Noah certaintly wasn't a tramp. But he sure made me feel like a lady.-- That's because you ARE a lady, Kay-d bug.
--I knew the moment that his hand trailed down my spine that I was a goner. I could almost hear Marcie's voice ringing in my ears telling me that it wasn't a good idea to move this fast.-- Kay, u were a goner from the beginning.... And as for Marcie's 'voice'.... this moment has been like 16 years in the making, it's not too fast :)
Author's Response: LoL well they've already had another moment...sure that was a result of stress and a little alcohol but it was still a moment and she CLEARLY remembers it. But I love the '16 years in the making' quote so I totally accept that. :)
Date: 10/21/10 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 32
I had a feeling their movie would be a dud. ;) Bowling should be interesting. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: I think out of the last four movies I've seen three have been a dud. It just happens sometimes...but at least they had a good alternate idea until they were interrupted!
Date: 10/21/10 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 32
I bet that Kay never thought Carters stupid nor boring... Oh Noah! You are good. You are great and a Carter.
Now the movie, oh Kay, he can make you forget everything, I can blame you. He is a Carter. That genes haves something....
Ohand when he said that she should be afraid to be alone with him... Her mouth waterer, isnt! Oh that dream... He is better!
I am at the phone, but when I saw the update I HAD to comment. Thank God AC were good to me this time.
I hope you have a blessed time, Jen! Good Lucky and I will miss you around!
Xoxo
Gabs
Author's Response: Kay loves the Carter. Noah's got great genes...and his middle name is Gene. Okay that was corny. Don't mind me! Her mouth did water...smooth line NoNo!
Date: 10/21/10 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 32
I almost forgot how sweet Noah is. Just almost but not entirely. (: I've been waiting for chapters like these! *squeals*
Author's Response: Noah is sweet...in a hot sort of way. :) LoL Noah's monopolizing Kay's chapters. I hope I can get under my 50 chapter limit I gave myself. haha
Date: 10/21/10 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 32
Awww that was cute and who says you can't make out in the back of a movie theater? I hope you have fun wherever you are going Jen. I love this chapter.
Oh and in responce to your halloween story
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LoL the interruption ruined Noah's plans. Carters and movie theaters are a dangerous combination! Thanks! I'm sure it's going to be an amazing day. :)
Date: 10/21/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 32
"You can't do that here," a geeky teenage guy said. He glared at Noah. I think he was probably jealous more than anything. No female would come within twenty feet of that acne.
JEALOUS much...nerd boy!! LOL
I'm sure Brooke is having a splendid time back at the hotel! Can't wait! Have a good day day out of town....that's always fun!!! :)
Author's Response: LoL Kay doesn't cut corners on descriptions. LoL. lol I don't know what Brooke's having back at the hotel....lmao. I'm looking forward to a day out!
Date: 10/21/10 06:57 am Title: Chapter 31
awwwwww Kay and Nono :) this made me smile and happy :)))
Date: 10/21/10 02:13 am Title: Chapter 31
"He's going to pick the prettiest girl and try to get under your skin. He's trying to play some psychology on you."
---I love how Kay kills Nate move.... hahah
"Well, it won't work," she said confidently. She closed the bathroom door. I laughed, but at the same time I had a feeling that this whole dilemma was going to mean trouble for Miz Carter.''
--you see, the beauty of this plan it's that you know the process, but you must FEEL it to understand.
''We were currently in shoe heaven. Of course, the shoes cost more than most people's car payments.''
--and we know that!
"Don't mention this to your dad," Angel warned Brooke. "He thinks I have a shoe addiction."
Brooke and I looked at each other and grinned.''
---Carter having craziness for material things? BLAH!
"Angel's not the only one with a problem," Brooke teased.''
--Let's face it, it's Vic. Secrets! C'MON!
''Angel laughed. "I won't explain your mom's theory. It'll just gross you out. I'll just say it must be something in the male Carter genes...or well, the other thingbesides genes."
--Oh boy.... Kay should LISTEN to that!
''I loved Angel. She was beautiful, smart, strong, and independent. I couldn't imagine raising a baby alone, but she had done that and continued a successful modeling career.
In my opinion, Angel rocked.''
--Angel is DA BOOM! Love her! Oh boy... Kay, she could be your... shhhh... Livvy WILL!
''I don't remember dropping my bags, but I did. The next thing I knew I was hugging Noah tightly and crying again.
"I've missed you," I said. Until that exact moment, I hadn't realized just how much I had missed him. He smiled.''
---Oh Lord, I'm sick with an awful flu and this made my night!
"So does this mean I'm getting closer to boyfriend material?" he whispered. I laughed shakily.
"What would you say if I told you that my whole school knows you already are?" I replied.
He pulled away. Our eyes met. Those beautiful blue eyes had me drowning in seconds.
"I'd say," he said. His head lowered towards mine. "I'm a lucky guy."
His lips met mine.
And for the first time in forever, I was the lucky one.''
---Oh boy.... OH LORD!!! BEAUTIFUL!!! She can be herself with him, a young lady.... she can be just a girl. HE WENT THERE!!!!!!! LORD! NEXT!
Author's Response: I'm glad I made your night and I hope you feel better soon Gabby! :)
Date: 10/20/10 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 31
Aww...what a nice surprise for Noah to come. L.A. is a trip full of surprises. I can't wait to see what else will happen.
Author's Response: LA IS full of surprises...it's almost like Vegas for Nick and Liv ::whistles::
Date: 10/20/10 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 31
I'm glad Kay has some happiness in her life now she has to back off & let Brooke be happy with Trevor. I so hope her & Noah work out. Although to be honest I am not liking Kay right now. Keep up the amazing work.
MArguerite
Date: 10/20/10 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 31
Omg omg Omg omg omg hehe hehe hehe hehe super amazingly awesome job hehe loved it. So happy Noah showed up hehe. I hope u update more today hehe so can't wait.
Author's Response: No more updates to FA today. Probably an update tomorrow. I'm trying to get a chapter of Heartbreaker up but it's not working. :/
Date: 10/20/10 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 31
Aw, Noah... :) Yay for happiness!
