Date: 01/25/11 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 47
I feel they are getting closer at each other ♥ What Nick did was so cute!
Author's Response: I like my Nick's to be heroes (With the Band...here...) it's just HOT!
Date: 01/25/11 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 46
I'm SO in Operation Carter. I'm with you Shay!
And Kevin turned out to be a complete asshole. I can't believe he was like that. I so LOVE Nick defending Shay ♥
Date: 01/25/11 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 47
I'm pretty sure he fell asleep in Heaven, indeed!!
Oh boy.... this will get ugly!!!
Date: 01/25/11 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 47
Lmao. I knew he'd fall aslep. Watch Lauren find out & freak out on him - hahaha.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 01/25/11 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 47
--"Why are your knuckles swollen?"
Nick glanced down at the fingers that were wrapped around his fork. Jake leaned towards me.
"The dentist bit him."-- Jake is awesome!
--I'm glad Shay wasn't mad about Nick beating Kevin. he deserved it.
--LOL @ Jake locking AJ out!
-- Y'know, I never got the appeal of Thomas either, he was/is creepy.
--Awww, what a cute way to end the chapter! luv it!
Date: 01/25/11 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 47
Awww. I had to laugh at Jake locking AJ out of the house...I did the same thing when I was 4....my mom told me that I wouldn't let her in and I was waving from the window until my dad came home. The neighbors came over too lol! Thomas the Tank Engine freaked me out too when I was younger..that also made me laugh. Nick is such a good daddy. Great update!
Author's Response: Can't you just imagine Nick's son doing that? I think I was guilty of locking my mom out of the car one time, lol
Date: 01/25/11 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
These characters are extremely well developed. I can see it as if it were a movie playing before my eyes. Such great detail! I love the way you make me hear what Jake is saying!
I really enjoy this story! Please keep it up! It gives me something to look forward to! :)
Author's Response: You're lucky. I'm on a roll! I think I might actually write this one into completion. Everything else has kind of gone on the back burner :) Thank you for the great character comment as well - I'm glad that I've been able to make semi-complex characters that are relatable!
Date: 01/25/11 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 47
Awwww I loved it. Can't wait for more.
Date: 01/25/11 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 47
I'm glad she didn't get mad about what he did to Kevin. I would have rewarded him. Great work!
Author's Response: I would have rewarded him too, but well...lol that would have been cheesy at this point. I'm saving my tokens to cash in on a raniy day :)
Date: 01/25/11 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 47
It gets better with each chapter :-)
Date: 01/25/11 06:20 am Title: Chapter 46
omg kevin is a total dick! and nick is in so much trouble with lauren!
Date: 01/25/11 06:19 am Title: Chapter 46
GO NICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEVER thought I'd see the day where Nick of all people kicked Kevin's ass!!!! (I can picture Brian kicking Kevin's ass though-lol)
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Oh I can see Nick and Kevin fighting...and it's a hot HOT mental picture :)
Date: 01/25/11 05:35 am Title: Chapter 46
Kevin you are a fucking douche bag, way too go nick. Amazing job. Can't wait for more.
Date: 01/25/11 04:53 am Title: Chapter 46
Wow...just....WOW! I can't get over what an asshole Kevin is in this. What a switchup! I think you've channeled yours and Hannah's story In His Shoes with Nick and Kevin! lmao!!
Author's Response: LoL, no they have not become trapped in one another's body! I have an interesting way to wrap up the Kevin thing...I'm not sure if it will get any of his 'points' back with you guys, but it's still an explanation. :Z
