Date: 01/24/11 04:38 am Title: Chapter 44
Kevin!!!! You fucking no-good player!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You sure do get around, don't you??? Are we sure you're not diseased yet??? Hmm???
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 01/24/11 04:33 am Title: Chapter 43
Lmao! Kids say the darndest things! Haha!
~Lenni~
Date: 01/24/11 04:25 am Title: Chapter 44
SHIT! SHIT! SHIT! LET ME KILL KEVIN? WHAT THE HELL HE HAS ON MIND? CHEAT SHAY WITH KRISTIN AND NOW HE'S WITH SHAY'S SISTER??? LET NICK KILL HIM TOO! OOOHHHHHH JEN!!
MORE!!!
Date: 01/24/11 04:17 am Title: Chapter 43
"I look wike my daddy," he said quietly. "I'm nice like my mommy."
Kid-speak for 'You're NOT nice, lady.'
"Of course you are!" Francie said, not realizing that she had just gotten burned. "Shay's always been the nice one."
--I just ADORE lill Jake! I think he and Nick could protect Shy.. mhmm
"Mommy, that lady was nuts."
---He has shay's brain!
"Jake nodded. "Otay! Don't forget dog-ow-do-want!"
"Deodorant. Check," I said. I noticed the playroom supervisor by the refrigerator. Her shoulders were shaking.
If there was one thing I could say about Jake, it would be that he was always a surprise.
Just like his dad."
--Ohhh his dad...
OH BOY!
Date: 01/24/11 04:08 am Title: Chapter 42
"Nick..." I said slowly. This was wrong. On so many levels. I had just wanted him to stay for a pork chop. And now, and now I was getting lost in those eyes. His eyes needed one of those peelable warning labels that stated: WARNING: if you stare too long you will lean forward to get a better look.
And just like when you give a mouse a cookie, if you lean forward for a better look, you're probably going to want a kiss to go with it...
MAN" I KNEW IT ABOUT THE HAND COMMENT!!! One day would be writing..
OH BOY!! OH JAKE!
WELCOME TO PARENTHOOD!!!
Oh boy...
Date: 01/24/11 04:04 am Title: Chapter 44
Oh my God o_o !!!!
I can't believe how much I'm hating Kevin/Blake/scumbag right now!!!! WTF is wrong with him, midlife crisis hit him full force? or does he want to relive his bsb early days? Lol!
Oh Shay! get out of there!
Date: 01/24/11 03:57 am Title: Chapter 41
OKAY.. BOUNCE BOUNCE! This will soooo get messy!!!!
The red wine... all this help... BOY!
Date: 01/24/11 03:50 am Title: Chapter 44
Wow, nice twist with Kevin, I was wondering when he would come back. Nick's in hot water with Lauren...can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Everyone's SOL right now! It's the best!
Date: 01/24/11 03:50 am Title: Chapter 44
Omfg that ass Kevin you dick. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: :grabs popcorn: This is going to be fun :)
Date: 01/24/11 03:46 am Title: Chapter 44
OMG No Way.lol This is getting good and the first part the convo with Lauren and Nick totally broke my heart aww. I really hope it works out for all three. I really like the way you write all the characters in this story.
Author's Response: I told you guys Kevin would be back! mwhahaha. Lauren really 'gets' Nick. I think more than he gets himself. :/
Date: 01/24/11 03:44 am Title: Chapter 44
OMFG.....Her family is obnoxious. I see why she doesn't fit in. Thank goodness. Can't wait to hear what Kevin has to say.
Lauren can read Nick better than he realizes. I kind of feel bad for Lauren.
Drama, drama, and more drama. I love it.
Author's Response: Drama's my name...fanfiction's my game :blows on my water gun:
Date: 01/24/11 03:17 am Title: Chapter 43
haha Love Jake,cute kid and aww love Nick with Lauren and Shay it's a conudrum. lol I am glad your making the decision and I'm just reading it.lol
keep up the great work.
Date: 01/24/11 03:15 am Title: Chapter 43
yep, don't like the sister. she needs to smacked! Good for Jake, even if the insult went over her head. I love it! :)
Date: 01/24/11 03:03 am Title: Chapter 43
Jake is so cute. Can't wait for more amazing job
Date: 01/24/11 02:54 am Title: Chapter 43
Aw Nick seemed a little disappointed there. I think there are definitely some sparks flying. i really don't like Shay's sister...this little family "reunion" is not gonna go well. Stupid jugemental family. Great chapter!
