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Reviewer: kaiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/11 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 41

I'm kind of torn in this story now.. I love how Shay and Nick are friends, but will there be more to it? Not sure what I want to happen, I really love the way you write Lauren too and I want her to be with Nick. But then Jake needs his parents.. Oh well.. good thing it's not up to me :)



Author's Response: I love confliction! and drama! and cliff-hangers :) I think that sums me up in three concepts, haha

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/11 08:47 am Title: Chapter 41

Aw yay she lost weight! Nick is a great exercise coach! I lol when he was watching her chest HA HA! Loved this update, happy they are getting along again!

Author's Response: Lol that's total Nick. If a tree had boobs he'd probably become a tree higher!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/11 02:24 am Title: Chapter 41

Friend my ass. You two are TOTALLY gonna hook up. And whether or not they do, I got the feeling Lauren will be a bit pissy about all the time they're spending together - lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: I get the feeling you and some others are a little suspicious of FRIENDS huh? :smiles:

Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/11 01:39 am Title: Chapter 41

just friends...????

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/11 12:12 am Title: Chapter 41

I'm so happy they are spending time together... Like friends. LOL. I'm loving this!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/11 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 41

Nice update, I'm glad things are going good at the moment for Shay and Nick. :)

Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/11 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 41

awww I LOVE this story.  It's had everything!  Awesome job!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/11 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 41

Amazing job. Can't wait for more. Loved it.

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/11 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 41

Guys+boobs=natural.  lol!  Its nice to see Shay letting down those walls and seeing that Nick has truely changed.  And I loved how she smacked his ass down! lmao! Nice chapter!



Author's Response: LoL especially Nick. Haha yeah, a punch to the stomach and an elbow to the back. CLASSIC. :)

Reviewer: SweetDsPixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/11 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 41

That is awesome that their mending fences and becoming. It is hard to do that after you hate them for so long.

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/11 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 40

Go Shay, get in shape! fun fun fun....

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/11 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 40

See this is what they need to get over past hurts plus bond with Jake as a family. Even if they don't end up together at least they will be friends. I am so loving this story.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Jake needs his mommy and daddy :) You're right about that!

Reviewer: Smoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/11 10:24 am Title: Chapter 40

Great update. Still love your story

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/11 10:13 am Title: Chapter 40

Hehe can't wait for more.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/11 04:39 am Title: Chapter 40

Roflmao!!!! I've always wanted to hit Nicky, though I dunno why. Seems like fun - I don't hit hard anyway - haha.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: I think it would be more about the body contact for me, lol