Date: 12/23/10 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 33
Aaw, what a nice suprise Kevin had. I know Jake and Mason will be like best friends, haha. Jake was so excited! Nick and Lauren engaged? That is news... Update soon <33
Author's Response: Jake's ALWAYS excited. It's the Nick in him. :)
Date: 12/23/10 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 33
i dont want to get to excited yet because i think a curve ball will be thrown, but, this is awesome
Date: 12/23/10 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 33
That kinda sucks for Shay, but that's awesome for Nick and Lauren. Nice twist with the ring thing from the cruise. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: See, I'm like Shay. I hear surprise and I automatically imagine THE best thing happening. Which is usually REALLY bad because my hubby never has grandious ideas anymore. :p
Date: 12/23/10 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 33
Amazing job so can't wait for more.
Date: 12/23/10 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 33
I always hate it when my daughter wants to get the paint out, lol, but I don't stop her. Aww nice that Mason and Jake are the same age, they'll probably get along great.
Date: 12/23/10 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 33
Aw Mason sounds adorable. I like Kevin's line "Those eyebrows are better than DNA". So true. I like that the kids are getting along. Shay sounded greedy. I mean what did she expect Kevin to do propose. I can't wait for her to meet Lauren she will really be bitchy then & start comparing sizes. Cool about Lauren & Nick. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: In Shay's defense, Kevin gave her a taste of greed during that weekend :) I do love the brow line though---those are the biggest blonde eyebrows I've ever seen. Either way, Mason's adorable!
Date: 12/23/10 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 33
I figured the surprise would be Mason - lol. Hope the kids play splendidly. :P
Hehe. Nicky engaged. I fear that day - then I'll no longer stand a chance whatsoever for sure - lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 12/23/10 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 33
Mason and Jake?! Awww. Wow Jake and I have the same birthday, I'm July 5th too lol! Mason is a cutie pie, love him to pieces. I wonder how Shay will react to Lauren, can't wait for the next update!
Date: 12/21/10 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 32
''Life sucked. I knew exactly what Shay had felt like watching me take Jake. The sight of her carrying Jake away killed me. I would have gladly changed wet sheets forever (okay, maybe not FOREVER) if I could have gotten a few more days with him. Or a whole week. Or a month. Or—
The throbbing in my finger seemed to get more prominent. My pain medication had totally worn off. I rubbed my neck. I wasn't going to cry. Shay had looked so relaxed, sitting there smiling into her cup. I had expected a frantic reunion. Instead, she had seemed practically carefree. It was the look of a woman in love. Or at least in lust. Something told me Kevy-kins had paid her a visit.''
---Life is a roll coaster, indeed... Shay is ALL about: LIFE IS GOOD.. Carter... LIFE SUCKS.... haah Live day by day.
The issue here is that Carter and Shay never had an ending. They never could try have something, and now life put them together again and with a SON. Carter has issues with Kevin too... Add that to the mix. Lauren is smarter than Carter thinks... and she plays wisely.Lauren snickered.
"You mean how one night with you ruins a girl for all over men?"
---She is fast... NEXT!
Date: 12/21/10 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 32
Aww that was a lovely reunion between Shay and Jake, but also sad for Nick having to leave him. They'll figure it out I suppose.
Have to agree about Beckham's hotness. I must sound terrible all these reviews raving about hot men, lol.
Author's Response: LoL I think Beckham's good lookin' too...nothing wrong with admiring a hot guy!
Date: 12/21/10 05:16 am Title: Chapter 32
Lmao. I'm glad everything's working out so well. Though, Nicky has a point - why hasn't Kevin gone home to check on Mason?
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: I never thought I'd see the day when Nicky actually had a point. :)
Date: 12/21/10 02:46 am Title: Chapter 32
Love it...you are making Lauren such a likable character! It's hard to hate a voice of reason~ LOL
Date: 12/21/10 02:28 am Title: Chapter 32
I like the contrast between the two parts. LOL at Nick changing wet sheets forever for more time with Jake. And we know that his assumption about Kevin is right. Thanks for another chapter.
Date: 12/21/10 01:48 am Title: Chapter 32
Awwwww I think nick may be moving to be closer to Jake in the near future. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Well, y'know Nick and moving :)
Date: 12/21/10 01:41 am Title: Chapter 32
Aaaw, so bad that Nick had to leave Jake. I'm wondering why is he so bothered with Kevin, haha. Next :D
Author's Response: Nick's a guy. I'm pretty sure it's a testosterone thing. :p
