Date: 12/21/10 01:12 am Title: Chapter 32
Nick and Jake are so cute together, and Lauren seems to be accepting the whole thing. Really proud of them for stepping up like that, and WOW Kevin! Shay loves Kevin but I see she is getting feelings for Nick again. Can't wait to see what is going to happen with the two of them. Loved the bit at the end with Nick and Lauren he he. Awesome chapter
Author's Response: I LOVE Lauren. :) Then there's Kevin...the epitamy of HOT. Nick and Shay are the big Great Divide...on one hand the only link they have is Jake, but that's a pretty BIG link, y'know?
Date: 12/21/10 01:09 am Title: Chapter 32
See they both had fun. But I have to agree with Nick. Kevin has always been about health and with Shay's weight problem makes you wonder why is he with her? Either way keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/20/10 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 31
the wet bed....that was your punishment Nick~ LOL
Author's Response: LoL he'll take it like a champ though :)
Date: 12/20/10 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 31
Oh Nick only you could get hurt during bowling. Jake is exactly like him. Sneaky and all. And Shay having adult time/fun. I bet she wants more of it. I just wonder about her & Nick. He did say he couldn't forget her chocolate brown eyes. I want to know how it all turns out. And I really hope her & Kevin used protection. Keep up the great work.'
Marguerite
Date: 12/20/10 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 31
I read it at my phone last night.. WOW! Kevin is SO good... isn't he?
Shay, WELCOME TO PARADISE!
Carter: WELCOME TO PARENTHOOD!!!
''Daddy will get the bed? Was she serious? I knew at that moment that life was changing. Lauren had spent the last day and a half being motherly and I was going to change wet sheets.
Talk about a total one-eighty.''
----Let's talk about love...
Date: 12/20/10 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 31
Haha.. Welcome to parenthood Nicky :) And Kevin is right, Shay deserves this.. And do you enjoy writing loopy Nick? :)
Author's Response: OMG I wish I could write loopy Nick ALL the time. :) Any way I can find to hurt him enough to give him pain meds, lmfao
Date: 12/20/10 11:09 am Title: Chapter 31
Kevin is one sexy specimen of a man!
Too bad for Nick and Lauren, but sometimes kids do ruin sexy time, lol!
Date: 12/20/10 11:01 am Title: Chapter 30
I now feel the need to find some shirtless Kev pictures! That was great, and that awkwardness she felt afterwards was so real.
Author's Response: LoL, check the darkside board in the rated XXX thread...lots of hot pictures of all our guys. :) Yeah, Shay's awkwardness is SO reality :S
Date: 12/20/10 04:31 am Title: Chapter 31
loved both chapters so cant wait for more love jake he is the best.
Date: 12/20/10 04:01 am Title: Chapter 31
Aaaw, so cute the part with Kevin and Shay <3
LOL; Nick had to clean the sheets, poor Nick... Haha. Update soon :)
Author's Response: Lauren thought quickly on that one. I'd much rather clean the kid than the sheets! :)
Date: 12/20/10 02:18 am Title: Chapter 31
lol. That's parenthood for you Nick. And Shay's right, she definitely deserves some adult time with Kevin.
Date: 12/20/10 01:54 am Title: Chapter 31
Lmao. I love how quickly you updated for me. ;)
Awww. I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE Kevin!!!!!!!!! *swoons*
*snickers* Ah, Nickers. You shoulda known life was gonna change the moment you discovered you'd a son. :P
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL haha I thought it was funny when I saw your last review. PERFECT timing :) Kevin's hot. 'Nuff said!
Date: 12/20/10 01:49 am Title: Chapter 30
Whoot!!! Kevin is A-Freaking-Mazing!!!!!!
Roflmao @ Nick!!!! Though, our bowling balls here are small & don't have hoels in them - lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL at our bowling alley's the little kiddie ones have holes in them. I've always imagined some doofus getting a finger stuck in one and flying down the lane. :) Now my imagination has fictionally come true! :)
Date: 12/20/10 12:31 am Title: Chapter 30
ooooh woooah! that was so great for shay!
Date: 12/20/10 12:12 am Title: Chapter 30
Okay.....that was something to write home about!! WHOOOOO HOOOOOO!!!! :) Go Kevin!
