Date: 12/19/10 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 30
AAAW; so sweet! I love how the guys went out for bowling, that was too cute. And the last part of the chapter, sweet and hot, lol! Can't wait for more <3
Date: 12/19/10 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 30
Wow, Kevin! Aw, he loves her! And the bowling was cute. I loved the beginning, how Jake's ball was rolling slowly down the lane, haha. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: LoL I love watching little kids bowl. It's almost like watching paint dry, except the kids are cheering it on :)
Date: 12/19/10 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 30
Nick bowling made me laugh. Lauren sounds like she will be good for Jake. As for Shay & Kevin he seems to like her but I love you???? Not sure if that is a good thing. Keep up the awesome work. I can't wait to see how this turns out. How many chapters will it be?
Marguerite
Author's Response: No clue how many chapters. Enough to get the story told I guess :) Lauren IS good for Jake. I'm so Team Lauren, haha
Date: 12/19/10 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 30
I'm so happy she finally got a taste of Kevin, she really needed it!!! Lol! And kevin seems to REALLY like her (I think the love part is too soon, but I'll patiently wait and see what happens)
I'm betting later on she'll feel guilty for not missing Jake in those few hours!!!
Author's Response: LoL ah yes, love is a funny thing :) Shay needed to, ahem, UNWIND, a little bit though...
Date: 12/19/10 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 30
Going bowling with Nick would be so much fun. I hope he didn't get hurt to bad with the ball stuck on his finger. That would be priceless to see. LOL.
Shay and Kevin...mmmmmm. They really make a nice pair.
Author's Response: LoL and it was his FAVORITE finger too! :)
Date: 12/18/10 02:22 am Title: Chapter 29
I hate you! you always end it in the MOST fun part! lol!
Date: 12/18/10 02:20 am Title: Chapter 29
omg jake is so cute
Date: 12/18/10 12:18 am Title: Chapter 29
Lmao. If I were here, I'd wanna do Kevin too - haha.
Aww. Nicky & Lauren with Jake are SO sweet!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL I think everyone reading this story would! :)
Date: 12/18/10 12:16 am Title: Chapter 29
I think Kevin could make my toes sweat too!!! :)
Date: 12/17/10 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 29
Thanks for another chapter. LOL at Nick, "Can I have it?"
Author's Response: Nick and his metaphors...
Date: 12/17/10 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 29
Oooohhh Lauren is good, man. I think she was used to say that, because she felt that Nick never wanted kids. She has some insecurity too... she is GREAT with kids, see the way she cares about Carter! lol
Oh ice cream.... Carter has the balls. Lill One too!
Can I have it too?? hahahah
Now Kevin... oh my... Kevin showing up at my door... dead...
Working out? Mmmhhmmmm I bet that they WILL have a sweat party... mommy needs some fun! Plus, he wouldn't travel just for see Shay....
NEXT!!!
Date: 12/17/10 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 29
Aaaw, Jake is having a good time with Nick and Lauren! The last part keep me thinking... What Kevin meant? LOL, I'm dying to know, please update soon :D
Date: 12/17/10 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 29
Aww Jake and Nick are so adorable together, but Kevin on the other hand...oh my god, that man is HOT stuff.
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 12/17/10 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 29
Hehe amazing job can't wait for more.
Date: 12/17/10 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 26
That kiss *sighs*
I love how Jake dropped him in it, lol, that's kids!
