Reviews For The Great Divide
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Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 29

I am SO loving this story!  Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 29

Oh this was hilarious. Lauren picking on Nick. Too easy. Jake is adorable. Yeah and I like Shay's second workout idea much better. With that mans body lord the things I imagine. What? Don't judge. You have probably thought them too. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: I think it would be way easy to tease Nickers :)

Reviewer: kaiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 28

Lauren and Nick are doing a great job with Jake, taking things in his tempo.. I'm proud .. lol :)

Reviewer: Smoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 11:29 am Title: Chapter 28

Great job on this chapter. Love the story more and more.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 07:10 am Title: Chapter 28

Lmao. I'm glad Jake's getting a little more comfortable with Nicky & Lauren.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. Shay, do not drink your sorrows & problems away. It's not healthy.

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 06:35 am Title: Chapter 28

Aw, that's great that Nick and Lauren are really trying to make Jake feel welcome, comfortable, and happy. And LOL at Shay, "Stay thirsty my friends." Haha.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 02:58 am Title: Chapter 28

Aw Jake is so cute. Nick will be a good daddy for him, but poor Shay. Those two need to get together....but its nice how sweet Lauren is to Jake and that she likes him. Love this story so much! Awesome chapter

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 01:23 am Title: Chapter 28

I'm glad that Jake is kinda enjoying staying at Nick's place, though he miss his mother. And Shay is kinda taking it bad, I hope she gets okay. Next :D

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 01:13 am Title: Chapter 28

Have to say that Lauren has a touch....

Good for Shay calling Kevin........she should have stayed awake for that phone sex! LOL

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 12:50 am Title: Chapter 28

Jake IS adorable, he is a Carter kid! Oh Lauren.... she is in love already!
Carter using the S H A Y with the kid..special one....

Ohh gazilions with sex phone, that would be good for Kevin.... that voice brings me thoughts... hello Mclean!
hahah
Poor Shay... drunk and alone. AWFUL Combo!
NEXT!

Author's Response: LoL with a kid as smart as Jake, best to spell any words you don't want overheard! :) Poor Shay...drunk in a hotel room, twisting words---but getting to hear that voice!! mmm

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 12:44 am Title: Chapter 28

amazing job so cant wait for more

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 12:42 am Title: Chapter 28

Yeah deal with it Shay. You cheated Nick out of 3 years of his sons life & now he is enjoying him. Nothing wrong with that. I can't wait to see what happens when/if Nick gets partial custody. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: I think you're being a little hard on her, but that's just me. LoL. I do agree with you that Nick's great with his son!

Reviewer: kaiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 27

I feel bad for Shay, this will take a lot of getting used to, and it will probobly hurt her like this for a long time.. But what done is done, and now her and Nick needs to make the best of it, for Jake's sake. And I understand her worry about Jake meeting Lauren, and liking her, and he probobly will like her. That's the beauty of being three years old, they tend to like everyone how gives them positive attention. But no one can ever take a good mommy's place :)



Author's Response: You're right...llittle one's end up really liking most everyone. Some just need a warm-up period. But there's nothing like a mommy to run back to :)

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 07:43 am Title: Chapter 27

:( poor Shay. I feel bad for her. It's not easy letting go of your child. But I do think Nick does have a right. She should have called Kevin.

Although I do think Nick has a right to see him and she shouldn't have kept Jake from him I do see why she did it. Last time she saw him, he was on drugs and he had insulted her. Who wants their kid near that? Poor thing. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Shay's a little over-protective and hurt. Nick's got to make up for lost time. They both have to get past their insecurities and animosities. Let's see how well all that works out, eh? :)

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 06:49 am Title: Chapter 27

poor shay, thats tough but so exciting for nick!!