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Reviewer: cookies Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 05:44 am Title: Chapter 27

If she had let Nick know he was a father from the beginning, things wouldn't be so difficult now. He has a right to see his son. She should be happy Nick WANTS to be a part of his son's life. Shay's taking the immature route thru this. Of course she misses the little guy, but come on now, she's not going to die. She needs to stay civil with Nick or it will all blow up in her face and she'll have no one to blame but herself.

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 27

Time to call Kevin~~~~ you have to do something with a kidless weekend~~~~~~

Reviewer: BiancaRJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 27

aawww poor Shay! I hope Nick doesn't take jake away from her, but what is a good story without a little bit of drama, right? Loved the update!!

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 27

I'm glad that Jake can spend time with Nick, but at the same time I'm sad that Shay miss him. Update soon <3

 

Reviewer: Helz1987 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 27

this is my fave story of your since nick and olivia! I want nick and shay to get together

Author's Response: Thanks! I really love writing this story :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 27

Well Shay, that's kind of your fault. But at the same time, being a parent is a 24/7/365 job. So I can understand that she never had time to date. Can't wait to read how this weekend goes for Nick, Lauren, and Jake.

Author's Response: I Love love LOVE reading everyone's comments. It seems like some people really feel for Shay, others feel for Nick, and others are just kinda in the middle. And yet, everyone's on Team Jake!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 27

Aww. I feel kinda bad for her, but Nick has got his rights to see his son. And I'm sure will all go just fine. You can tell just how much Nicky loves the kid.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 27

"When you're in a relationship with someone, things tend to become your business whether you like it or not."
--Brian is so wise.... he will have a LOT to teach Carter. Oh this Cruise.. let me tell ya...


Oh and Jake crying and screaming MOMMY!!! Jesus... this was a depressing chapter.



''I would have given anything if I could have gone back in time and stopped Jake from bumping into Nick. I know everyone says a boy needs his father, but in reality a mother needs her son.
Especially when he's the only thing she has.''
---Yes... a mother needs it. Oh and a father too... a real father! Carter has the opportunity to live and show this.


Poor Shay.... I think Carter has something on her....

NEXT!

Author's Response: I was really depressed this chapter. Neither Shay or Nick is perfect but I hurt for Shay right now :*

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 27

Yeah well tough shit Shay. You should have told Nick from the beginning that he had a son. You cheated him out of 3 years of his sons life. And now he wants him. As for Kevin he can butt out. None of his business. I don't feel sorry for her at all. Not Nick's fault her life is pathetic. She made it that way. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 27

I am SO hooked on this story!!!   Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: SweetDsPixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 27

My heart is so breaking for Shay. I wouldnt know what to do with myself if my ex used his visit rights i would feel the same way.
cant wait to see how this visit goes.

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 27

Aww, I feel so bad for Shay. That had to have been hard for her to be away from Jake when she's been with him pretty much every day of his life.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 27

Awwwww poor Shay. Can't wait for more

Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 26

that is so goooooddd!! Ohh my I just picture kevin's grin most be to die for!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/10 12:44 am Title: Chapter 26

Tsk, tsk. Jealous much Carter?

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~