Date: 12/13/10 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 25
"The future of my son's cleanliness was now resting in my hands." lol.. I guess Carter always thinks in big words :) Love how Nick interacts with Jake, but I want Nick to stay with Lauren, and Shay to stay with Kevin.. I think it will only mess with Jake's mind even more if his parents tried dating and it didn't work out.. And i saw this weight loss show on tv the other day, and there was a girl there named Shay, made me think of this story.. :)
Author's Response: LoL were you watching the Biggest Loser? I was addicted to that season. :)
Nick THINKS in big words but they don't come out of his mouth like that. :)
Date: 12/13/10 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 25
Omg!!! Shay in Nick's mind, he's got a problem alright!!! But at the same time i hope he gets to a point he eats all the things he said! (yes I want him to suffer!!! Lol)
Date: 12/13/10 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter LOL wow kev getting aggressive. Yes Carter has "fuck me" eyes. So frickin hot. I want to kidnap Jake is that bad? I love him too! Its the Carter charm. I love this story!
Author's Response: Mmm Aggressive Kev = Hot. Nick's 'fuck me' eyes = Hot. Shay = IN DEEP TROUBLE. :)
Date: 12/13/10 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 25
Yeah Nick I would say you have problems. But you also have a son that loves you a lot. SO I think you are winning. AS for Shay dating Kevin that still doesn't seem right. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/13/10 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 25
Okay I know that Shay and Nick have Jake together, but I want her to be with Kevin! :) Just my two cents! Love this story!!!
Author's Response: LoL will I have Team Nick and Team Kevin in this story? haha love it!
Date: 12/12/10 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 24
Love it! Hope to see some more updates, soon.
Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks! I seem to update this story in spurts, lol
Date: 12/08/10 04:58 am Title: Chapter 24
OMG!! I didn't see Kevin coming!! that was a big shock for me AWESOME!
Date: 12/08/10 03:27 am Title: Chapter 24
I just LOVE this story! I'm glad that Nick is into his son... And I knew Blake was someone Nick had met! I can't believe that was Kevin... And Jake is SO adorable! Can't wait to read more, keep up the excellent job <3
Date: 12/07/10 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 24
Go Nick. Do not let her tell you that you can't see your son. As for Kevin if he really likes her good. She deserves a man that will love her no matter what. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/07/10 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 23
Ok I can see Shay being mad but she had no right to get that mad at Nick. He was right she let her "boyfriend" meet Jake but she threw a hissey fit over Nick wanting Lauren to meet him. Nick should go for custody. Then she couldn't say shit. Keep up the amazing work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/07/10 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 24
OMG!!! I didn't see that coming (Kevin?!?!?) that was great
Date: 12/07/10 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 24
I can forgive Kev for giving a different name, it's not as if he lied about anything else and if it's his new stage name then no harm done :)
Can't wait for more!
Date: 12/07/10 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 22
Did not see that one coming! Wonder why he's calling himself Blake? I thought they handled it well telling Jake that Nick was his dad.
Date: 12/07/10 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 21
My son has to have tons of ketchup too! I'm liking the sound of Blake, not many people would stop to help like that.
Author's Response: I think its a little kid thing. Actually, it's a Jen thing too. I have to have ketchup with everything!
Date: 12/07/10 06:41 am Title: Chapter 22
OMFG It's KEVIN!!! *dies*
