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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/10 01:16 am Title: Chapter 24

Roflmao!!!!!! Two Backstreet Boys in YOUR APARTENT!!!! DAMN YOU ARE LUCKY!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. Carter better NOT have brought Lauren around!



Author's Response: LoL I know...she's such a lucky bitch! ugh, I'm jealous. :)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/10 01:12 am Title: Chapter 23

Kevin is NOT scum!!!!!!!!!!!! He wanted to be known for himself, and not just as a BSB member.

~Lenni~

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/10 12:56 am Title: Chapter 22

CALLED IT! lol Seriously though, when he said he was from Kentucky I was like "hmm... could it be...?"



Author's Response: How many of you does that make? oh, the hell with it :p

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/10 12:21 am Title: Chapter 24

oh man, poor shay, I KNEW "BLAKE" KNEW NICK!! oh man, what a twist... i really cant wait to see how this all goes down!

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/10 12:01 am Title: Chapter 24

Screw the tub when you are getting action from "Blake"..........rawr~

Author's Response: I would screw IN the tub...with either guy!

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 24

''Kevin always scores points. :) He's tall, dark, and handsome!''
hahah Yeah.. I fall good for these men...

Oh Carter timing.... is a Carter thing!

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 24

Oh Carter.. I smell trouble....

''But it had been a long time since I had gotten a kiss. And an even longer time since I had gotten a kiss from a guy that wasn't drunk...or high.''
---Oh ouch! hahaha
Oh Kevin with that look... Jesus...


"Actually, it's Nick," Nick said. "Good morning."
I sighed.
What did I have to do to just get a tub fixed around here?''
---*shaking head* Shay.. your hands are full there...

so Kev will stay a lill longer in Chigaco.... Carter is jealous! hahhah

NEXT!!!!!!!

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 24

Man, they are playing the "keeping it in the family" bit a bit much aren't they?  I mean, Kevin COULD become Nick's kid's stepdad...lmao!!  OMG..another Carter being raised by Kevin.  Come to think of it, Kevin may think back all those years ago of Nick and hightail it outta there....I mean, Jake IS Nick's clone!  lmao!!!



Author's Response: I'd say it would be more creepy if this was Brian/Kevin y'know? LoL Of course you're right--if he remembers how Nick was at fourteen...fifteen...sixteen...Shay's in TROUB-LE!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 24

hehe amazing job hehe cant wait for more

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 24

Kevin is so sweet to her, and that southern charm is hard to resist lol! Shay is falling big time for Kevy. I like her with him, but I feel bad about Nick being the daddy and showing up at THE worst time EVER. Ah well. Must be a Carter thing! Nick cracks me up with Lauren. "but that was then, this is NOW." so cute. Loving this!

Author's Response: LoL Jake and Nick BOTH have bad timing...it's that male Carter thing at play :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 24

LOL at Kevin and Nick just showing up at Shay's apartment. I wonder what's going to happen...? Thanks for another chapter.

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 24

Wow! Score some points for Kevin. At least he's trying to not be such a jerk.

I hope Nick is there for the right reason, his son. It shouldn't matter that Shay is dating someone even if it's his older brother. Nick can be a dad and still have Lauren. Why can't Shay be a mom and date a hottie like Kevin.

Author's Response: Kevin always scores points. :) He's tall, dark, and handsome!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 23

See we all knew it was Kevin lmao! Love how Nick started questioning him about Kristin, I was a bit confused about that as well. "everything leads back to oprah" LOL...so true! Kevin's using a different name. Oh what drama....Nick and Kev. Shay needs to stop jumping the gun...not all men are jerks, she needs to give people a chance, but I can't blame her. Nick is rushing things a bit and shay is right...bringing Lauren in would make things confusing! Awesome chapter as always!

Author's Response: I know, I suck. How else can you describe that man though? Lmfao. Shay is jumping to conclusions...she's stressed. That doesn't make her right; but I know where she's coming from. I suck under pressure....first you've got Nick wanting to be 'instant dad' then you have a hot guy with a fake name....what else can go wrong?

Reviewer: Smoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 23

*stares at her computer with her mouth wide open*

Author's Response: Ah, ^^ best comment all day. Really :)

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 22

KEVIN!!! I wondered.........whoooo hoooooooo!!!!! LOVE IT JEN!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad everyone enjoyed the slight twist :)