Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 22

I TOTALLY CALLED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHOOT!!!!!!! I JUST *KNEW* IT WAS KEVIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was kinda obvious - dark hair, green eyes, from Kentucky, in Chicago on business....lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: Haha everyone called it. Black hair and green eyes gives it away almost every time. :)

Reviewer: Smoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 22

What the f*ck!! This is trouble........
You cannot leave me hangin' here!!!

Author's Response: Trouble with a capital T and a very scared 'e'!!

Reviewer: kaiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 21

You are a mastermind when it comes it fanfic, you know that right? :) Blake sure sounds like someone we know well from before, and that would be a nice little twist in the story.. Love how Lauren acts about Jake now, but her and Nick should take things slow and get to know both Shay and Jake before they start talking about custody..               

Author's Response: Lauren's a take-charge girl...she's taken charge of Nick hasn't she? (I don't mean that as bad as it sounds lol) I'm team Shay, so I do feel uneasy about the whole custody thing. :S

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 09:07 am Title: Chapter 21

BLAKE IS KEVIN!!! He is SO
KEVIN!!!! OMG! "my son lives in LA", Kentucky? Southern accent...green eyes...long arms...KEVIN!!!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 05:41 am Title: Chapter 20

Loved it

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 03:20 am Title: Chapter 21

Lauren's really into this whole Shay-Jake thing isn't she? Can't blame her for bring curious though. And this Blake guy seems nice, I wonder what his story is? Thanks for another chapter.

Author's Response: I would be dying of curiosity...and after all, its not something you can really forget about and mvoe on from. Lauren seems like the type of girl that really focuses on something when she has it (aka Nick)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 02:39 am Title: Chapter 21

"It's funny," Blake said softly. "Your son looks so much like someone I know."
I reached over and ruffled Jake's hair. "He has one of those faces."
---a CARTER face...


''Blake picked his fork back up and speared a cherry tomato. "I guess so. He's a cutie."
I felt pride. I knew most of the credit went to Nick. I didn't think I had contributed many genes. I had just squeezed him out of my vajayjay after three days of labor.
--telling the kid is a Carter... slow but lovely charming...


"He's my pride and joy," I agreed. I nibbled at another fry. I suddenly felt watched. I was surprised to see Blake looking at me. His green eyes sparkled and crinkled at the corners.
Even though I didn't want to, I melted.''
--This Blake guy.... Kentucky... he haves a kid living in LA... HE IS KEVIN!!!! HE IS KEVIN!!
Ooohhh she will have something with KEVIN! Ooohhhh LORD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NEXT!
Ooohhhh imagine Carter kid being raised by Richardson.. of COURSE he KNOWS that face! JESUS, JEN!!!!

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 02:28 am Title: Chapter 21

I am agreeing with everyone else...this Blake guy seems to be a lot like Kevin....hmmm.

I can't wait to find out more.