Date: 12/06/10 02:24 am Title: Chapter 21
I'm with what Rachel said in her review. My first thought was "That's Kevin!!"...
Date: 12/06/10 02:23 am Title: Chapter 21
Ok..who is this Blake character. Something tells me he's not who he says he is. The "I've heard of it. My--" he stopped. "It's really popular." thing has me suspicious.
Author's Response: Hmm, that was a little suspicious on hindsight, wasn't it?
Date: 12/06/10 02:14 am Title: Chapter 21
Sounds like Nick is stuck in a rut with Lauren. As for Shay not sure I trust that guy. Maybe he is working for Nick. Who knows. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: I don't know if it's so much a rut. They're just comfortable with each other. Now this Blake guy has everyone suspicious...I kinda love it!
Date: 12/06/10 02:14 am Title: Chapter 21
Dude, that is so Kevin!
Date: 12/06/10 12:56 am Title: Chapter 20
Thanks so much for the update. Jake is a real cutie and I wonder what's up with this Blake guy?
Date: 12/06/10 12:53 am Title: Chapter 20
shay stop feeding him mcdonalds all the time!! lol blake sounds a lot like kevin.
Date: 12/06/10 12:51 am Title: Chapter 20
To be honest, #2, my mind went to Kevin too Lenni...
Date: 12/06/10 12:50 am Title: Chapter 20
''Jake nodded. "My tummy's burpin'," he said. He held out the napkin. "Beautiful!" I said. The car shimmied again. Jake's head fell back and he sighed dramatically. Waiting for a three-year-old was torture.''
--Nah... he's a a tiny Carter...
Oh this Mr Blake.... mmhmmm..
''I would begin to worry about myself again the day Jake turned eighteen.
Or twenty one. Or thirty...''
--Yeah.. let's see that!
Oh Jen, please don't take too long at this. I already love lill J!
To be honest I think Carter should stay with Lauren....
Author's Response: I love lil J too! I'm keeping mum on relationship issues...I have a story to tell after all :)
Date: 12/06/10 12:48 am Title: Chapter 20
I thought at first it was gonna be Kevin who knocked at her window - lmao.
UPDATE!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: haha sounds like an accurate description, doesn't it? :)
Date: 12/06/10 12:45 am Title: Chapter 20
So Lauren is jealous. She would not like Shay because of her size. And I'm glad Shay & Jake are ok. So she met a guy. Good for her. I just hope he is a good guy. And if she tries to tell Nick she had & man & he can
t see Jake she will (I hope) lose. Jake has a right to know who his father is.
Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Who wouldn't be jealous though? If my husband suddenly had a kid, I'd want to know what the mother looked like.
Date: 12/02/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 19
Ooo need more! Just caught up on the last few chapters and think Lauren took it really well after it had sunk in properly.
Date: 12/02/10 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 19
this is great!!! love it!!! just want more and more from this story
Author's Response: I love leaving like a three-day cliffhanger...I think I'll be nice and write Ch. 20 tomorrow :)
Date: 12/02/10 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 13
Didn't see that coming! I was sure there'd be more Fat Camp. Hmm, I'm liking this turn of events :)
Author's Response: I just needed to get the back story going...it actually took longer than I thought! :)
Date: 12/02/10 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 12
He's a complete pig! How dare he treat Shay like a piece of shit! Who does he think he is! Arghhh!! So glad he got busted for his stash though, about time someone brought him down a peg or two. Poor Shay, I feel so sorry for her, no one wants to be classed as a mistake like that :(
Author's Response: I felt so bad for Shay this chapter...Nick's words were venemous...I wanted to smack the shit out of him :/
Date: 12/02/10 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
He's Nick Carter and he's a complete dick more like it!! lol
