Date: 12/02/10 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMFG that was hot stuff! Should not be reading in work! I still laugh everytime I see the word johnson, lol.
Author's Response: Nick is hot....it's just his ego's alo doubly inflated which isn't a good ocmbination. And no, you shouldn't be reading that at work lol
Date: 12/02/10 12:18 am Title: Chapter 19
i feel a bit sorry for lauren... but he "just" has a kid and not an serious desease!
sure things are maybe different, but things always change... if nothing ever changes, it means stagnation and that is not good either... be tough lauren!!! maybe she falls in love with nickīs mini me too!!! I believe, that Jake is a benefit for everyone...
but i donīt think, that shay is gonna like this!!!!
***"What did I do?" I asked. I was old enough and wise enough to know that when she cried, nine times out of ten it was something I did. Or said. Or didn't say.
Relationships were fuckin' complicated.***
awww... this is soooo sweet... i love this!!! *.*
i wonder what she hit with the car. o.O i HATE cliff hanger ;o)))
greetings from austria!!!!
btw... i loooove romance and cheese ;o) i wonder where this story leads us!!!!! love it!!
Date: 12/01/10 03:37 am Title: Chapter 19
ahh dont leave me hanging?!
Date: 12/01/10 01:03 am Title: Chapter 19
Hmmm...wonder what she hit with the car.
Hoping & keeping fingers crossed you'll do the unconventional thing and actually keep Nick & Lauren together in this story. Throwing romance into the Nick & Shay part would be too much cheese (IMO). ;o)
Date: 12/01/10 01:00 am Title: Chapter 19
Whoa, what happened?? Wow. Can't wait for another chapter.
Date: 12/01/10 01:00 am Title: Chapter 19
Ooooooh. A cliff hanger!??! Really now?!?!!?
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Oh course! And considering I probably won't update until Friday...or Saturday ::evil laugh::
Date: 12/01/10 12:57 am Title: Chapter 19
WHAT??????????? WHAT HAVE HAPPENED???
Poor Lauren, btw....
Take a lot of breaks," he said wisely. I laughed and stood up. Jake's big blue eyes stayed on me until the door closed behind me. I sighed.
''This was the hardest part. I would have loved to be a stay at home mom, but that was impossible. All I could do was make sure Jake spent his days in an environment that promoted learning and play.''
--Poor Shay...
NEXT!
He was already too smart for his own good.''
Author's Response: A smart mini-Nick. The world's in for a WHOLE mess of trouble there!
Date: 12/01/10 12:57 am Title: Chapter 19
Oh shit what did she hit? I hope her and Jake are ok. As for Lauren it's nice that she is accepting Jake but I still want o see Nick & Shay get together. Keep up the awesome work.
MArguerite
Author's Response: What DID she hit? hmm....I love that you make your couple preference so clear :)
Date: 12/01/10 12:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Holy Crap!!!! Death? OMG!!! Can't wait for me! You're killing me Jen! LOL
Author's Response: I friggin' LOVE ending chapters that way!!
Date: 12/01/10 12:45 am Title: Chapter 19
Ooooohhhh my so cant wait for more
Date: 11/30/10 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 18
I don't wanna be to quick to judge Lauren, if my boyfriend came home after a business trip and told me he met his 3 year old son he knew nothing about I would probobly freak out, be in denial and try to find a easy solution too. Nick should give her (and himself) some time to prosess it all.. And maybe there is more to the story as to why she don't wanna have kids..
It seems like Jake really wants a daddy, and he probobly needs a fatherfigure in his life aswell. Let's just hope is mom and dad is gonna do the right thing by him..
Author's Response: Yeah, I think I'd pull a Sheila Broflowski from South Park....wha-wha-what?! haha. I'm in the middle of my big stirring pot of drama right now...we'll see how the pieces fall.
Date: 11/30/10 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 18
See that should be the only clue Nick needs. Lauren was right for him for a small part of his life. Now she's not. Personally I think he should be with Shay & Jacob. That however might take time. Keep up the awesome work,
Marguerite
Date: 11/30/10 11:00 am Title: Chapter 18
Wow, that's a bitchy comment from Lauren.
I think Nick should stay whith his morals and be a dad to Jake!
Thank you for the update again.....
Author's Response: Nick and morals. I love that combination! :)
Date: 11/30/10 08:46 am Title: Chapter 18
Shay won't make it easy for Nick, but he also has deserve this!
I LOVE, that he doesn't let up and that he is absolutely determined to be there for his son!!! the cute little buddy deserves a daddy, who cares for him and loves him!!!! (her granny smells like bees??? awww... how sweet...)
hmm... lauren and nick decided to live their life, without kids, therefore I don't find her behavior so unusual. although I would have wanted another reaction for Nickolas...
I hope, that Nickolas holds his promise !!!
CAN`T WAIT FOR MORE... :D greetings from austria!!!!
Date: 11/30/10 07:41 am Title: Chapter 18
eeeeeeeeeeeeekkkkk!!! AWESOME!!
