Date: 11/29/10 05:34 am Title: Chapter 11
Fuck Carter, you are messed up!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Damn straight he did!
Date: 11/29/10 05:31 am Title: Chapter 10
Ooooh! I bet he inpregnates her - lol. They better not et caught!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Haha supersperm + penis stage = trouble. ::snort:: Sorry, I couldn't help myself!
Date: 11/29/10 05:26 am Title: Chapter 9
Tsk, tsk. There's always Bitches in competition.
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Of course there is...it makes the whole competition thing even more frustrating...
Date: 11/29/10 04:47 am Title: Chapter 13
Be a father and a good man is the GREAT DIVIDE....
Date: 11/29/10 04:46 am Title: Chapter 13
I was READING GD again, and Shay isn`t that fat... she was 186 and now 175.... she isn`t tiny as me!!!
Author's Response: I know she's not that big...but in Cali-think she is...and in U.S. that's considered total plus size model. Stupid, really.
Date: 11/29/10 04:27 am Title: Chapter 13
``He grabbed onto the napkin. He suddenly seemed to realize that he was ridin' solo, but he struggled to act tough. He shrugged. I smiled.``
---pretend.... such Carter way to go...
Yeah, it must hurt to love so much or son that`s the spill image of the man that broke you.
Author's Response: LoL yeah poor lil' guy inherited some of his dad's traits. :*
Date: 11/29/10 04:22 am Title: Chapter 11
Great chap! LMFAO at "fuck-flushed." What a funny, but pretty accurate term. LOL. That was hilarious when RIchard walked in on them, he would giggle like a school girl! And wow at the ending. Nicky boy is getting a little, well...assy if you ask me.
Author's Response: I absolutely LOVE the phrase fuck-flushed. That's so going to make it into another one of my stories, lol.
I totally picture Simmons giggling like a girl...Leave it to him to ruin a saucy moment :p
And Nicky being an ass...::sigh:: Yeah, totally
Date: 11/29/10 04:12 am Title: Chapter 13
OMG I so didn't see that coming hehe amazing job so can't wait for more
Author's Response: Surprissseee! LoL I figured ya'all got 'nuff back story...now the fun begins.
Date: 11/29/10 04:06 am Title: Chapter 13
It's been so long since I had the time to actually read all of your updates, I feel guilty!!!
I was expecting a reunion, but OMG! I was so not expecting a mini Nick!!!! And I feel so bad for Shay because it feels like Nick really took what self-confidence she had left. He needs to make it right again!!!
Author's Response: That's okay! I've been totally busy with school and work--I know how ya feel :)
I'm glad SOMEONE was expecting a mini Nick! I felt I was making it obvious. Nick totally broke her heart and ruined her self-confidence...which was already a little shaky even though she put up a semi-decent front.
Date: 11/29/10 04:05 am Title: Chapter 13
OH LORD!!! I was going to ask if she wouldn't get pregger.. SHE DID!!!!
Ooohhh and Jake's soooooo his daddie. I would pay to see Carter's face looking to his own tiny mini version....
Poor Shay... she isn't in a good place.
NEXT!!! PLEASE DONT TAKE TOO LONG!!!
Author's Response: LoL she did...as I told someone else--I think the supersperm jumps from story to story :p
Jake is his dad...it's got to hurt seeing that little face day after day. :S
Date: 11/29/10 03:58 am Title: Chapter 12
pathetic guy.... Lord!
'I was going to get clean; I was going to get my damn heart checked out.
And I was going to find a smoking hot woman to make me feel good again.
I was going to take the knowledge that I fucked a fat chick to the grave with me.
It was my little secret.''
-- *shaking head*
NO COMMENTS!
Author's Response: That was probably the most horrible thing I've ever written...He's such a pompous ass
Date: 11/29/10 03:50 am Title: Chapter 11
*shaking head* YOU ARE FUCKING STUPID, LILL RAT!
Author's Response: Do we not love Nick now? LoL
Date: 11/29/10 03:45 am Title: Chapter 13
Aw, poor Shay, being all sick and running into Nick. Ha! I knew Nick got her pregnant! Wow! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I think the supersperm travels from story to story. lmfao. The worst part is having the flu, looking like crap, and having to deal with that emotional trauma all at once. Poor thing :/
Date: 11/29/10 03:44 am Title: Chapter 10
0.o..... LORD! Going to the next one.. that was HOT, btw...
Author's Response: I can't write a non-hot sex scene involving Nick...I don't think it's possible at least. :)
Date: 11/29/10 03:40 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow, I wasn't expecting Nick to have to leave that soon. On to the next chapter...
Author's Response: LoL I'm a reality TV junkie. When something serious goes down they always have to leave immediately. It makes for good TV (and good fanfic). :)
