Date: 11/29/10 03:36 am Title: Chapter 9
Oooohhhh Carter... and the thoughts Shay... *shaking head*
--- If he was covered in chocolate, well...
--- And getting a a hot soapy shower....
The poor woman needs to....
And Carter..
--- 'but I was a panty man no matter what.' Yes, he is a man!
'I think in attempt to get away from the Fruit Loop Fairy'
--- just remembered Leighanne and her Fairy Pink Land.. hahahah
Author's Response: LoL at Leighanne & Pink Land! :)
Shay totally needs some, just sayin'
Date: 11/29/10 03:34 am Title: Chapter 13
oh my... did expect this turn when I started reading but I am loving it. Can't wait to read more. As always YOU ROCK!!!!
Author's Response: I think most people expected this turn, but that's okay. :) Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 11/29/10 03:26 am Title: Chapter 13
WOAH! i was loving this story and wondered where it went and then you come back with this! damn cant wait for more!!
Author's Response: I was on a roll. I hope five chapters in one day makes up for the lack of updates in forever ::grin::
Date: 11/29/10 03:26 am Title: Chapter 13
Wow! I was wondering if something like this would happen since they didn't use protection. Nick's life is about to change.
Author's Response: Well, it was kind of a given knowing me lol But still...any excuse to work an adorable kid into the plot!
Date: 11/29/10 01:04 am Title: Chapter 11
Man, Nick is really playing with fire, if Shay or anyone finds out about the drugs...
LMAO at Richard Simmons walking in on them! Another great update. :)
Author's Response: You've got that right!
Richard probably was totally flustered. I'm sure missionary isn't on his list of positions :p
Date: 11/29/10 12:04 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh shit Richard could really kill the mood. Unprotected sex was not smart. I bet she gets pregnant. And Nick's pov made me think he was a shithead. A hot one but still a shithead. Yeah his image isn't so great now. Oh I can't wait to read more. Excellent as always.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Nick is a shithead! Yes he is hot but a shithead. I don't like him when he's like that...
Okay, I do like him but not as much as I would if he wasn't a dick. haha
Date: 11/28/10 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 11
oh nick u can be so shallow sometinges cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Nick's being totally shallow...I just want to smack him
Date: 11/28/10 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 11
Shay seems so happy now but I feel kind of sorry for her because after reading Nicks POV I am sure there will be hurt feelings and heartbreaks...
Nick is kind of a j*** here but I think he is just scared to admit to himself and others that he is starting to have strong feeling for Shay.... he is falling for her... I hope everything will work out but we will see
Drugs are definately not the answer though Nick!
Great chapter Jen thanks for updating again!
Author's Response: Nick's a hot mess...and his inner monologue is totally cruel. I have a hard time writing him like that :S
Date: 11/28/10 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 10
Holy hell! That was really hot. Lol at pill Nazi! I really wonder how things are gonna be now after this. Hope you got more written :)
Author's Response: Where Nick's concerned it can't be anything BUT hot. :) At least in my imagination (but I'm pretty sure in reality that rings true as well). And I do have more written..I was totally inspired today. :p
Date: 11/28/10 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 10
Who the HELL could blame her?! Hell, if I woke up to THAT pressed up against me, I'd probably **** right then! *blushes*
I suddenly have this cute little image in my mind of Nick, curled up in that bunk wrapped in his Tampa blankie...hehe. Such a fanboy.
Loved this chapter!! Can't wait to hear the reasoning for the crying tho...
Author's Response: haha I know EXACTLY what you're talking about! I love that Nick's a fanboy...I just want to squeeze that man and not let him go.
Date: 11/28/10 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 10
The three bears and goldy girl is my daycare kids favorite story.. Think I'm gonna have a hard time telling them the story without laughing after reading this :) And I would like to see the girl who can resist the Carter charm, I know I'm not even close to being that strong.. But unprotected sex Nickers? Not your smartest move..
Author's Response: LoL I love when Nick uses kid references....anytime they come up at work then they always make me smile, lol. :)
Date: 11/28/10 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
About how long will it be?
Author's Response: LoL I honestly can't tell you...I don't have the whole thing mapped out yet
Date: 11/28/10 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 10
Papa Bear and Goldy girl ... I like the names lol... great chapter... I am surprised that she resisted him that long.
But did I mention that I have a certain dislike for cliffhangers like ... "she was f*** crying" .... to be continued"
LOL I wanna know why she is crying so bad now ...will there be updates before friday?? I am going on vacay for about 2 weeks and I need to know how that turns out lol :) (Your stories are addictive :) lol in a good way!!
Author's Response: Nick's great at description...it's silly description but I <3 it. You're not the only one that hates cliffies! But I love them SO much. There's going to be quite a few updates this week because I'm sorta kinda on vacay this week. I took time off to get schoolwork done..buutttt
Date: 11/28/10 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 10
is this going to be a series? Cant wait for a update! Will there be another today?
Author's Response: No series! There will PROBABLY be at least one more update today for sure. :)
Date: 11/28/10 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh my oh my. Getting hot and heavy in nick bunk hehe. I hope she's ok. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: ::sigh:: Lucky bitch! Lmfao
