Date: 11/28/10 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 10
I have a feeling that round of sex is going to have "consequences" Nicky...not too smart of you... ;) Thanks for another chapter.
Author's Response: Well if I remember correctly 2005-07 were NOT smart years for Nickolas...I'll add in 2008 for good measure lol
Date: 11/28/10 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 10
Yeah I knew she wasn't strong enough to resist the Carter charm. Hell she lasted much longer that I would have. Oh to wake up to that in bed with me. Damn yummy thought. I like that he doesn't care about her size. I wonder if she is on the pill? I hope so. And why was she crying? Keep up the great work. Will this turn into a series????
Marguerite
Author's Response: Shay's a lot stronger than I am. Man I'd die if Nick Carter crawled in bed with me! haha Nope this isn't going to turn into a series! Just a one-shot. I still have my hands full with the Coaster world :)
Date: 11/28/10 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
Aw, that was sweet of Shay to help. Lots of funny stuff in this chap, as usual. Love the "fruit loop fairy" part and how he was talking about the "sexy mud". That was cracking me up! Thanks for updating :)
Author's Response: LoL Nick looks gooo-od in sexy mud, lmfao. I'm glad you enjoyed it! I think I'm about ready to post the next chapter. I was on a writing spree for this story this morning!
Date: 11/28/10 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 9
Awesome job so can't wait for more.
Date: 11/28/10 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 9
I had to stop reading to gigglesnort at Fruit Loop Fairy...but once I started reading again...I loved it! She's sooo got the hots for Carta! But then again, even heavier, the man was hotter than HELL! Great chapter!!! So happy to see you on this one again!
Author's Response: I'd take heavy Nick...okay, without the heavy drug use and drinking, but still...rawr. I love a little tummy on that man! :) haha I'm going to run out of descriptions for 'Richard' pretty soon!
Date: 11/28/10 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 9
Thanks for another update, Jen. :)
Author's Response: No problem! I've missed this story :)
Date: 11/28/10 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
awww ive missed this story! Its my fave of yours
Author's Response: Aw thanks! I'm baaa-accck :)
Date: 11/28/10 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad she helped him. It showed class and she got to cop a feel of that juicy booty. Personally I do not like Victoria. She sounds like a shrew. Dara I like. I still think Nick was adorable. I want to see them end up together in the end. Yes I am a sucker for a happy ending. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Mmm I love that juicy booty. I'd grab it if he needed help just crossing the street. LoL seriously. :)
Date: 11/21/10 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
has this story been discontinued?
Author's Response: No, like I said before--I'm in the last few weeks of school and I am not able to write as much as I want. This story will pick up by mid-December.
Date: 11/15/10 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
has this story stopped?
Author's Response: No way! I just have to take a break from it...I'm heading towards finals week at college and as I do, the work increases a thousandfold. I'll return with a vengenance during Christmas break if not sooner!
Date: 11/05/10 05:57 am Title: Chapter 8
Lmfao Nick. Silly silly boy. Loving this chapter as well. Awesome update!
Author's Response: Would we have Nick any other way? I <3 my silly boy!
Date: 11/04/10 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
Thanks for another chapter.
Date: 11/04/10 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ooohhh Boy!
'How the hell did I develop a conscience?' The moment you me Carter!
Oh Boy.... that kiss and make out.... I would be that way too.
I loved how Carter could see the other side.
And that now the girls can have abetter clothes. More clothes.
"You can't quit! If you can't keep your britches on that means you already lost weight. What's your secret?"
"I don't have a secret," I said.
"Yes, you do."
I whirled around. Nick was grinning ear to ear.
"You have a Victoria's Secret."
---Oh yeah, if they only knew...
''It was the corniest line I had ever heard. I was hot. I was sweaty. In truth, I was wearing Lane Bryants. The only thing I had going for me was that I had actually shaved my legs. Otherwise the world would have seen a pink-pantied Chewbacca.''
---You tell me girl!
Now bring Carter doing the macho thing! We want to see Shay laugh a lill bit... oh he will make her pay...
We will love it!
NEXT!
Author's Response: Those girls needed more clothes! I don't know what it is about my Star Wars references lately either...lol
Date: 11/04/10 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
Hehe so can't wait for more.
Date: 11/04/10 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
She actually turned him down? WOW!! She is better than me. I wouldn't have been able to. I do love how they interact together. And they defiantly want each other. SO do it already. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
P.S. I thought you might want to know that now no one is getting email alerts anymore.
Author's Response: LoL they've known each other, what two days? three? I know most of my characters are hounds but Shay's a little different. :)
