Date: 01/29/11 04:20 am Title: Chapter 55
Ahh, I'm so addicted to this story! I can't wait until Nick gets back and sees Shay! I love them together, their family thing is so cute :)
Date: 01/29/11 04:05 am Title: Chapter 54
I really hate Kevin, lol. And I used to miss him when he wasn't for a while in this story. I can't believe him!
Date: 01/29/11 02:48 am Title: Chapter 55
OK, so I read the last 3 chapters because I got hopelessly behind today. AWESOME is an understatement. I love it. This story is amazing. :) Keep it coming! :D
Date: 01/29/11 02:24 am Title: Chapter 55
"Oh, and Nick?"
"Yeah?"
"Just keep in mind how good I look in a bikini."
Shit.
---They won't play it fair...
I tried not to giggle. "Night, Nick."
"LOVE YOU!"
We hung up; I held onto the phone thoughtfully.
Love you?
---He isn't easy too..
Shay's voice was soft and sensual. "Not anymore. In fact, I plan to fight for you."
I swallowed hard. "Fight?"
"Let's just say, I can't wait until you come home."
My mouth dropped open. Suddenly, and not for the first time since I left, neither could I.
---Shay is good... GO CARTER!
Date: 01/29/11 02:06 am Title: Chapter 55
They SO belong together! Lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 01/29/11 02:00 am Title: Chapter 55
lol at Nick calling Shay at 3 in the morning and the yelling. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Well at least he had the best of intentions even though he couldn't hear
Date: 01/29/11 01:56 am Title: Chapter 54
Lmao!!!!! I bet Nick's wondering why he suddenly hears water - haha. If only lobsters could talk like Sebastian in The Little Mermaid.
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Under da sea; under da sea. Where life is better and lobsters swim free!
Date: 01/29/11 01:51 am Title: Chapter 53
Whoot! Starying to fall in love - haha. I think you were there long ago Carter.
~Lenni~
Author's Response: My only response is that Nick's blonde :)
Date: 01/29/11 01:35 am Title: Chapter 54
Haha, cute ending. :)
Date: 01/29/11 01:05 am Title: Chapter 55
Man you're on a roll tonight but I'm loving the updates I'm still following this story, btw. Jake is so freakin' cute! And Nick loves Shay, lol. I really hope they get together. :)
Oh and im just wondering if you're stopping at 60 like your other stories?
Author's Response: This one might be 70 because I don't want to rush the ending
Date: 01/29/11 01:02 am Title: Chapter 54
"Oops!" Jake cried. "The wob-sters need to make a call!"
--PERFECT CARTER MOMENT!!!!
I WILL KILL KEVIN AND KRISTIN! NICK OF COURSE WAS RIGHT! WTH LITTRELL???
Author's Response: Jake is my much needed comic relief. Haha I love him and the lobsters
Date: 01/29/11 01:00 am Title: Chapter 55
LMAO at Brian and AJ telling Lauren to beat him up. And awww at Nick saying love you. He is so cute. Its so nice that they realize that they do care for each other like that. Nick is a sweet guy, he can take care of Shay. Awesome update again!
Date: 01/29/11 12:51 am Title: Chapter 54
If I hadn't lost my repect for Kevin BEFORE I knew what was up, I definatly did now. How in the HELL can you play with someone's emotions, feelings like that..just for the sake of a damn MOVIE?! I think I'm fumin over here as much as Nick is! And to involve a 3 year old!?! Ugh..makes me SICK!
LMAO @ The wob-sters need to make a call! Jake is just too freakin much man! I love that lil guy!! Just as much as I do his daddy! lol
Author's Response: I think I mentioned you guys weren't going to like Kevin any more after you guys learned the truth!
Date: 01/29/11 12:46 am Title: Chapter 54
Kevin is such a dick. Amazing job tho. Jake is way to funny can't wait for more.
Date: 01/29/11 12:42 am Title: Chapter 54
Wow, Kevin is an asshole...I don't care if it was a movie. Glad Howie agrees with Nick. I don't like the sound of gym guy lol. Loving the update palooza....awesome chapters!
