Date: 07/17/11 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
I have a feeling that last line is Nick speak for: "Yeah, she's gorgeous, but I'm smart enough to never tell you that" :)
Date: 07/17/11 04:45 am Title: Chapter 4
I looooove the coaster series, spool happy you're back with it! I'm already enjoying it to the Max. Uhhhh I smell trouble ..... hehe hope you update reaaaaaaally soon :) xoxo
Date: 07/17/11 01:58 am Title: Chapter 5
awwww, squishy!! LOVE IT! great chapter!
Date: 07/16/11 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
i lov Pey she so funny cant wait for her story to come, her one liners lol
Date: 07/16/11 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
more more more mooooooooooooore !!!! awesome as ususal!!!!
Date: 07/16/11 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
LOL, Peyton! Well, three kids and a few occasions of too many onion rings will do that to you. lol Oh Nick...him with Zack and the drum stick duel and his forgetfulness. I do love this family, some of these scenes remind me of my own childhood, like the putt-putting. I can remember being competitive with my slightly older brother over who was better, but it didn't really matter once we got ice cream afterward. :) Great job, I can't wait for Zoe to meet Liv...
Date: 07/16/11 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
Can I just start by saying AWWW!
Nick is such a good dad.As a husband he is kind of a clueless bonehead but as a dad he is good at his job lol and Poor Peyton but that whole "STUPID BALL!STUPID CLUB!STUPID ELEPHANT BUTT!" thing made me lol and then she follows that up with "Oh,Mommy, You're not fat you're just squishy." LMAO that kid is all Nick in the sense of humor department and I am sure she didnt even know she was being funny lol!I could totally see Nick saying that to someone when he was little lol.I am loving this story though I have a sneaking suspicion I am gonna end up wanting to slap some sense into Nick before its over because I am already starting to feel that way.I mean come on man dont you know that women dont trust other women alone around their man and you go and hire this little blonde chick and then dont even tell Liv about it. WTF,dude?There's awhole lot of drama coming his way,I can tell.
Anyway,Great chapter!Great Job!Cant wait for more!
Date: 07/16/11 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
lol at Nick standing the boy the long away. I think it gr8 you r putting it Liv POV so that we see what she says and wonder what happe to.
Date: 07/16/11 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
I feel for that boy I know Nick sent in the wrong direction. Typical dad. And I already hate dial a skank Zoe. I hope Livvy turns her into a pretzel. Keep up the perfect work.,
Marguerite
Date: 07/16/11 03:02 am Title: Chapter 4
Awww. So sweet Carter is. I love him - for now - lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 07/16/11 02:59 am Title: Chapter 3
Lmao. Oh, Carter. You & your babies - lol.
~Lenni~
Date: 07/16/11 02:14 am Title: Chapter 4
Nice save there Nicky-Boy! lol
And dear GOOOOOOOOD how you described him, the I Still look, I think I may have actually shuttered....*crosses legs*
Date: 07/16/11 01:58 am Title: Chapter 4
uh oh. drama with Zoe coming?? :) Great chapter!
Date: 07/16/11 01:34 am Title: Chapter 4
Well this chapter was hot until Nick started making Liv worry about this little photographer chick.Great Chapter!Great Job!Cant wait for more!
Date: 07/16/11 01:12 am Title: Chapter 4
I looooove the coaster series, spool happy you're back with it! I'm already enjoying it to the Max. Uhhhh I smell trouble ..... hehe hope you update reaaaaaaally soon :) xoxo
