Date: 06/01/09 04:19 am Title: Masquerade
Wow...first of all let me say that I am proud of Nick. He really showed in this chapter maturity and he also stood up for himself. It would serve Adie right if he walked away from her and found someone else. She has been selfish throughout the whole relationship and everything has to be on her terms. I am glad that Nick didn't just fall back into a relationship with her but stood up to her.
Adie is once again playing the victim role that she is so good at. I am glad that Nick isn't falling prey to it anymore.
As for the end I understand completley Nick losing his temper....He wanted to leave and he is exhausted and sometimes we do things that we aren't proud of when we are overwraught.
It dosent' need to be said but I loved this chapter. I love your writing you really make the characters come to life and make them human.
I can't wait for an update!
Author's Response:
It would have been so easy for him to just fall back into old habits and for the first third of the chpater he did just that. I think the realisation hit him hard and that was when he knew he needed to open up, he needed to make her see because he was only going to end up resenting her even more if he let it drag on. It was definetly the wake up call that she needed!
I think Nick loosing his temper is going to truly shock not only her but him as well. It is going to make them both realise what a mess they both are and I think they are going to have contrasting solutions to it, one is going to want to fight while the other is going to want to give up (No guesses who!)
Thanks so much for the awesome compliments hun, I'm glad you are enjoying the story! x
Date: 06/01/09 04:09 am Title: Masquerade
Now THIS is the chapter I've been waiting for! Go Nick! Adie has a lot of work ahead of her -- as she should.
Author's Response: I knew you were going to like this chapter! See I told you it was coming! LOL! Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/01/09 04:09 am Title: Masquerade
OMG! more soon!!!
Author's Response: I am hoping to crank out another two chapters this week. So hopefully it won't be tooo long!
Date: 06/01/09 03:54 am Title: Masquerade
whoa...that was...different. Nick blowing up like that but of course I can see why, she never took his feelings into consideration. I hope they work things out.
Author's Response: It was just a matter of time before it all bubled to the surface and in fact I think most people would agree that it has been a long time coming. Thanks for the review x
Date: 06/01/09 03:17 am Title: Masquerade
wow.... i could feel Nicks pain as I read this chapter (with tears in my eyes)... all that emotion was going to come out sometime... I am glad he is finally releasing it and I am gald Adie is finally fighting for them... I think Nick is doing the right thing... it think is time Adie does the fighting.
I cannot wait for the next chapter...
Author's Response: You're right it is high time that she fought for them but in Nick's eyes is just too late. It's a good thing that he let his emotion out though, she needed to see that to realise what she had done. Thanks for the review hun x
Date: 06/01/09 02:54 am Title: Masquerade
wow!!! I cant wait for the next chapter!!!! very intence. very emotional. gave me goose bumps. amazingly well written. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the fab review hun. I'm glad that it gave you goosebumps! x
Date: 05/31/09 04:37 am Title: Back At Your Door
awww that's sweet come on Nick and Adie!
Author's Response: I don't think you are going to like the next chapter very mch! Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/31/09 04:34 am Title: Birthday boy
oh no i am scared!
Author's Response: Why are you scared?
Date: 05/27/09 04:11 am Title: Back At Your Door
Such an evil person you are...I may have to coin you clean of the cliffie. Great chapter...loved that she finally did it (have you noticed both of our gals are stepping up a bit lately, loving that). Monday is far too long to wait, but what can I do...I'll survive! Hugs!
Author's Response: I know! Hehehe! It's amazing that both Adie and Quinn have realised whats important I just hope it's not too late for the pair of them! HUgs back at ya! x
Date: 05/27/09 01:12 am Title: Back At Your Door
AHHHH!!!! Yeah!!!! can't wait for Monday's update!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks x
Date: 05/27/09 12:20 am Title: Back At Your Door
Great chapter. Pretty damn happy she finally made a move. Can't wait to next monday. Take Care!
Author's Response: I think lots of people are, including me! LOL!
Date: 05/26/09 11:56 pm Title: Back At Your Door
Well, it's ABOUT TIME!
For both of them, I mean. Nick, for making the small gesture to move on (the phone # deletion) and Adie, for finally getting her head out of her butt and doing what she should have done a long time ago.
Looking forward to the next installment. ;o)
Author's Response: Glad that you liked it. There is so much more growth to come from the both of them! Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/26/09 10:14 pm Title: Back At Your Door
Awesome!!! God Monday is so far away!!:'( LOL can't wait!!
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/26/09 09:59 pm Title: Back At Your Door
YES! She finally came to her senses and went back to him. AWESOME chapter and boo about the update. :-P
Author's Response: Yep she sure did but there is lots more drama to follow!
Date: 05/26/09 09:54 pm Title: Back At Your Door
Next Monday!??! Are you insane woman!?!? Cruel is an understatement! But I'm so glad to see that Adie is finally getting her head out of her ass and going after what is due to her AND to Nick...thinking of someone else besides herself. Great chapter and I'll be sitting on pins and needles till the next one!
Author's Response: I was hoping to get another chapter out a little sooner but I have big plans this weekend and it may actually end up being Tuesday! Sorry! You may have to sit on pins and needles for a little while longer but I promise it will be well worth the wait!
