Date: 05/11/09 12:01 am Title: The Pieces Don't Fit Here Anymore
she just walked away from him wow my sis wanted her b/f with her at all times know people deal with it different but have to side with Rachel. I know he hurting but Nick hurting to she going into her own little place poor Nick x
did you got the song name i send you
Author's Response:
People do tend to act differently in situations like these, Adie has always been known to run from her problems so it makes sense that she has run from Nick because being with him is just a constant reminder of what they lost.
No I didnt get it hon, where did you send it? x
Date: 05/10/09 11:07 am Title: Now That She's Gone
it was different what happend with my sister but im from scotland so it could be different x Nick is right she will regret it if she did not see the baby my sister got to see my nephew so did I we got to hold him too. it happend 6 months ago and my sister has her good days and bad days so it is a long way to go for Adie and Nick. Also it times like this you find out who are your true friends are. I will send you the song u can used it if you like but listen to the words x
Author's Response: It is such a horrible thing to go through and my thoughts go out to your sister and to you. Nick and Adie have a hell of a long way to go if they are ver going to make it through to the other side intact. The song would be great actually, thanks xxx
Date: 05/09/09 03:55 am Title: Now That She's Gone
Oh poor Nick and Adie!
Author's Response: I know it is very sad.
Date: 05/08/09 05:42 pm Title: Now That She's Gone
Wow you are on a roll with these updates!
I just don't know what to say to this situation. Adie is going to retreat back into herself and that is the part of her that I can not stand. It seems like she is going in circles and that she will never truly get out of herself. I understand this is a hard situation for her but she needs to realize that it is hard for Nick too, she isn't the only one suffering here. Adie's character plays the victim card waaaaay to much and I'm sick of it. I personally would like to see Nick's side of the story for once. You give us a little taste of his perspective but then put us right back in with Adie's view point.
I hope that you don't end this story with them apart. I really would like to see things work out of them eventually and I know that they will work through this, however I have a feeling that with the loss of the pregnancy that if and when Adie retreats back to her old ways Nick won't be there to help her. Which I think would be good since she needs to learn to take care of herself & love herself before she can be with anyone else. That's the biggest lesson she needs to conquer.
Keep up with the fast updates!
Author's Response:
It is a really difficult situation because every time she tries to break out and be more open and more optimistic something comes along to knock her back down. She is going to blame herself a lot in the next few chapters, she is going to withdraw from everyone and she is going to make a lot of people angry at her. It is going to get to the point where people get so sick of her that they won;t want to be around her anymore and I think Nick already realises that.
You are right in what you say about her needing to love herself before she can be with Nick completely.
Thanks for the review
Date: 05/08/09 04:56 pm Title: Now That She's Gone
WOW....Amazing chapter. You captured the hurt of losing a child so beatifully! Wonderfully done. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks hun
Date: 05/08/09 03:27 pm Title: Now That She's Gone
Amazing, amazing!!! You really captured all of the emotions both of them were feeling, this chapter was utterly heartbreaking.
So odd that you mentioned the aspirin, same thing that my SIL I told you about had to do, she has since had 2 healthy children...but the only thing that made the loss of the first one better is to have another. So I think that's where you may take this, if of course, Adie cooperates, which she is not known to do.
Awesome job! More soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks hun, I am so glad that I got it right. It's difficult to tell since I haven't been through it myself. I actually read about Hughs syndrome about six months ago whilst at work! It just seemed to fit perfectly, a lot of the time women don't even know they have it until they start trying to have a family.
Adie co-operate? You are joking right? LOL!
Your turn now!
xxx
Date: 05/06/09 01:53 pm Title: Long Road To Ruin
Kinda hoping this is a major dream sequence and Nick will wake up from it. Man, just for ONCE can't there be a happy ending? Damn.
Author's Response: It would be one hell of a dream! Actually one hell of a nightmare. Thanks for the review x
Date: 05/06/09 03:14 am Title: Long Road To Ruin
OMG NOOO! Poor Addie and Nick! more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review x
Date: 05/06/09 03:04 am Title: Long Road To Ruin
I do hate this, but I'm sure you had your reasons. Such a sad chapter, and you did a beautiful job of writing it. one of my SILs actually went through this same thing, but at 38 weeks...such a horrible thing. Can't wait to see where this is going now! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks hun. It was a very difficult chapter to write but it serves a purpose for later in the story I promise. I can't imagine how hard it must be to have to go through it in real life, it must be awful. xx
Date: 05/06/09 02:16 am Title: Long Road To Ruin
Talk about gutwrenching!! I had tears in my eyes!! Great chapter! Can't wait till the next to see who Nick called...tho I have a good idea who...Hurry!!!!
Author's Response: You will have to let me know if you were right. xx
Date: 05/06/09 01:27 am Title: Long Road To Ruin
This chapter is heartbreaking. My heart goes out to them, I could never imagine how it feels to lose a baby. I don't know why you made this happen but I'm sure we'll find out soon enough.
I just hope that Adie doesn't close up and shut herself down from Nick and everyone else. She needs his support as much as Nick needs hers. I know it will take time but I hope everything works out.
Author's Response: There are going to be so many obstacles in their way and it is going to be a very bumby ride. This situation is going to test their relationship to the brink and the jury is still out on whether they will both make it to the otherside! Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/06/09 12:36 am Title: Long Road To Ruin
it is either Angel or Kevin maybe Brian x
When my sister when though it, we all was hoping that it was wrong and the baby will come out sreaming but of couse it did not happen after it all happen my just wonted her family there all the time but she also started to drink. She got a song for him and the words just so right for this kind of thing.
Author's Response: I'm not telling who it is you will just have to wait and see. It has to be awful to be told that your baby has died, I just hope I am capturing the emotion sensitvely enough.
Date: 05/06/09 12:27 am Title: Long Road To Ruin
This was so heartbreaking, brought me to tears. i agree with mary, i'm going to have to be mad at you for awhile. :p I can't believe they lost Molly. I'm really curious about the next couple of chapters and what direction its going to take Nick and Adie. Great work. Can't wait for more! :-)
Author's Response: It is going to take them in many directions, loosing a child has to be one of the worst thing a couple can go through. It is going to be a very challenging time for the pair that is for sure! Thanks for the review hun!
Date: 05/06/09 12:09 am Title: Long Road To Ruin
freakin ah. i think I have to be mad at you for a while. wonder if Nick called Kevin? Cant wait for more! congrats on story of the month!
Author's Response: Thanks for the congrats! It was very exciting! I totally understand that you have to be mad at me for a while, and actually I think it will get worse as the story progresses! LOL!
Date: 05/04/09 04:02 pm Title: All Good Things Come To An End
Congratulations on being story of the month! You deserve it! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks hun!
